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Title: The Seeker In Hiding 14 Aug 2014 4:14 am
Reviewer: Jtz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love it!
Title: The Seeker In Hiding 07 Apr 2012 2:00 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    POor Harry
Title: The Seeker In Hiding 06 Mar 2011 9:18 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    I love it! Awesome chapter. I wonder why Harry hasn't thought of making or nicking a healing potion though. Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Mostly because he's thirteen and things are happening too fast.  Perhaps if he'd dare ask Hermione...
Title: The Seeker In Hiding 05 Mar 2011 6:03 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is awesome! I can't wait for the upcoming chapters! :D
Title: The Seeker In Hiding 04 Mar 2011 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Chandramas (Signed) [Report This]
    “Ah.” replied Snape, silkily, “I see.” he paused a beat, “Well, fortunately, I have some time this evening.”


    I love this statement. I loved the fic so far, but I have to say this is SO SEVERUS. I don't know why but I see it in my head so clearly, with Harry panicking and Severus espression-less face.
    Plus I suspect that Severus gave Harry a detention just to be sure the boy will have time to absorbe the phisical test result.
Title: The Seeker In Hiding 04 Mar 2011 9:48 am
Reviewer: Agelfish (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love how you are writing this! Thank you!
Title: The Seeker In Hiding 04 Mar 2011 5:52 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I just had to say...what an awesome story! The characters' emotions, thoughts, and interactions are so real and believable.

    Poor Neville...my heart breaks for him.

    I'm glad that Severus has had an epiphany...or I suppose he's still in the middle of it, but I love your portrayal of him, and of Harry's friends, also. I like how they divided 'duties' with the twins and Hermione going to the adults and Ron assigned to keep Harry busy.

    Harry's rationalizations and denials are so true, but so sad. I do hope that he will get the help he so desperately needs. I can't wait to see how his relationship with Severus will develop.

    A fantastic job and I can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Severus is working through an epiphany.

     

     

Title: The Seeker In Hiding 04 Mar 2011 3:42 am
Reviewer: xVortex of MemoriesX (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good. Update soon.
Title: The Seeker In Hiding 03 Mar 2011 8:39 pm
Reviewer: ihearttwojacks (Signed) [Report This]
    Very suspenseful chapter, just waiting for Harry to get caught. I really like how Snape shows his concern for Harry through his regular snark and nasty attitude. You did a great job with his personality here!
Title: The Seeker In Hiding 03 Mar 2011 7:09 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter; I loved your depiction of what's going on in Harry's mind, the rationalisation of his abuse, the attempt to create and excuse for his bruises, the invented reasons why he doesn't want to go for the exam- they're all highly believable and well written. I also really liked how you're portraying his feelings over Neville; it's very vivid and emotive. Oh, and the scene with Snape is great ^^

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