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Title: Home Visit 22 Sep 2017 8:32 am
Reviewer: Lucinda Hindle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, well, I was a little disappointed with the anti-dramatic meeting, but at least now they know why Harry was so reluctant to say anything, he felt that if the Ministry itself had said those things to the Dursleys than they won't help him and he would just make a fool of himself. Poor Harry, I love a guilt ridden or flabbergasted Severus.
Title: Home Visit 14 Aug 2014 4:54 am
Reviewer: Jz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Would love to have seen the Dursleys cursed...
Title: Home Visit 07 Apr 2012 12:03 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    No hidden nightmare charm or something?
Title: Home Visit 14 Apr 2011 8:57 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    I love how you are portraying Lupin; he was always depicted as the most thoughtful of the marauders and the subtle manipulation he shows in this chapter is oringal but still feels in character, especially in the light of his time with the werewolves. Vernon and Petunia were suitably horrible and I loved Severus' quiet strength and the way he plays along with Lupin automatically, then turns on the thumbscrews when he and Petunia were alone.

    Author's Response: Lupin does that creepy-friendly thing with Pettigrew in PoA.  I thought it was scary as anything.  And the fact that Lupin is physically slight but really, really strong would just wig Vernon out all the more.
Title: Home Visit 16 Mar 2011 11:41 pm
Reviewer: Caesara (Signed) [Report This]
    So good!!!!
    I love how Sev is not too mean but still very snape-ish.
    Will harry find out Snape's his dad???
    great joB!!

    Author's Response:

    I'm trying to keep Severus true to character.  

    Thanks! 

Title: Home Visit 16 Mar 2011 6:08 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I loved how all the characters behaved in this one.
Title: Home Visit 15 Mar 2011 4:45 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Please update soon! I want to see where you take the story.
Title: Home Visit 15 Mar 2011 11:09 am
Reviewer: blossomhaiku (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is a great story. I am enjoying what you've got thus far and am steadfastly looking forward to reading more.
Title: Home Visit 15 Mar 2011 12:14 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter they make a good team!
Title: Home Visit 14 Mar 2011 4:16 pm
Reviewer: watercrystals (Signed) [Report This]
    wow, tense fic alright. I can sense the seriousness in it all (not ust by the topic of abuse and such, but because of the way it's written), and you've done an excellent job of portraying everyone ina very believeable manner.
    You did not have Lupin and Severus using magic on the muggles as people tend to do (which is annoying because it's so unrealistic), so thanks.
    You've done a really good job on everything and I look forward to reading every next chapter you update! Which I hope is soon because I really want to know how this if going to turn out! :)
    Great job, keep it up!!

    Author's Response: Severus is trying very hard to keep this quiet, so yes, any use of magic might be detected by the Ministry.

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