| Title: Appointment in Hogsmeade
| 15 Aug 2014 1:58 am
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| Reviewer: Jz (Anonymous)
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I wondered if he would jump. Bad me
Author's Response: I don't think you're bad...
| Title: Appointment in Hogsmeade
| 25 Jun 2011 6:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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It's scary that Harry's thoughts seem to be verging on suicidal. The dementors made it worse at the end of the chapter, but Harry was already sort of leaning that way on the Astronomy Tower, it seemed. At the least, he seems to be in a serious depression. I hope Severus will notice it soon.
And I do wonder about Ginny, as she was obviously not on the Tower to study.
It's too bad that Harry can't realize that Severus is trying to help him, but they have had a hostile past and Harry's not inclined to trust adults anyway. I just hope Severus will really take note of things before something happens.
Great chapter!
| Title: Appointment in Hogsmeade
| 27 Apr 2011 10:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Love it! Fabulous emotions and descriptions.
| Title: Appointment in Hogsmeade
| 26 Apr 2011 7:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I wonder how canon Severus would have felt if he had known this? Good chapter thank you
| Title: Appointment in Hogsmeade
| 19 Apr 2011 6:15 am
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| Reviewer: Olga (Anonymous)
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Thank you so much! Absolutely loved your story - and falling in love with it over and over again, with each new chapter. Your English is captivating, the way you show the characters speak and move is breath-taking! Thanks again, and the song fit. Oh, it did perfectly, thank you.
Great update! I still think Snape and Harry need joint therapy sessions. LOL! Now wouldn't that be interesting?
Excellent chapter. I loved Harry's thoughts throughout the chapter, very realistic, really made good reading. I especially liked the reaction to the dementors. It was a very plausible reaction.
That was another insightful chapter--a little moving at the end. Good stuff
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