| Title: My Child
| 15 Aug 2014 5:06 am
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| Reviewer: Jtz (Anonymous)
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I love the pure blood blight detail!
Molly was clear alright. Even to a not-native speaker of English. Dont worry.
I like this story.
Great chapter, I'm really enjoying this story!
So is Sev going to admit Lils wants him to be like a father to Harry. (By the way, what does she mean Harry is like his father even if he looks like his dad? Are you referring to the fact that they are both stubborn? Or something more?) Will Harry learn to trust Sev? Does Harry have any of his skills or just James'?
Please write more? Please?
| Title: My Child
| 22 Jun 2011 9:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved seeing umbledore get his comeupance serves him right thank you
I loved the manipulation of Fudge and Severus' standing up to Dumbledore at the end. Fantastic story!
| Title: My Child
| 19 Jun 2011 7:28 am
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| Reviewer: xikum (Anonymous)
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I am soooo happy that Severus took that stance!! I know that Dumbledore is in an unenviable position, being essentially the leading general in a war, and ultimately responsible for the outcomes - but I also believe he makes the mistakes of not having close enough advisors, and not keeping others fully informed so as to be able to fully consider any plans. More people fully informed may well have prevented untold pain on many, including Dumbledore himself.
Great chapter, really enjoyed and I loved how Snape more or less tells Dumbledore to bugger off :) Well done and cant wait for the next.
| Title: My Child
| 18 Jun 2011 11:14 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Good for you Sev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yes finally doumble dork is told off twice in a row! I love molly too. more please
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