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Title: Making Himself At Home 16 Aug 2014 3:43 am
Reviewer: Jtz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Love the story
Title: Making Himself At Home 08 Apr 2012 7:05 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Heehee. Reninds me of my very old very nosy greataunt
Title: Making Himself At Home 09 Aug 2011 10:18 pm
Reviewer: Clover (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I hope everything's OK with you and you have a chance to update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Title: Making Himself At Home 01 Aug 2011 10:59 pm
Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Agh! Wrote a long review but the security code was wrong, how frustrating. Ok, so I LOVE this story! The characterisation is brilliant, especially in Snape, he's still snarky and snappy and a bit harsh (in character yay!) but at the same time slightly more caring towards Harry. I wish Harry gained a bit more confidence like in canon, but I see where you pulled the submissive nature from (his abuse) and it helps give him a different dynamic and therefore for Snape to be more caring towards him, but still, I'd love him to gain some confidence and perhaps argue with Snape? But I emphasize, this is my attempt at constructive criticism (rather than just listing 101 reasons why this story is awesome - which I could easily find!) and it is your decision whether to use it or not. I love the twist with Snuffles/Sirius.. I'm not sure if the reader is meant to make this connection or not, but if not it's pretty obvious, unless I have it completely wrong.
    I'm begging you to finish this, please please continue! I can't bear another amazing-but-incomplete-story :'( And I'm a bit suspicious of this Mrs Cook person! :o Anyway, PLEASE keep writing!And now I'm going to try damn hard to get the right security code. -.-

    Author's Response:

    Updating soon!  

     

    Neville's death has hit everyone really hard and Harry is still in a bit of shock over the events of the last few weeks. He hasn't lost his spine, he's just going with things right this minute, 'cause that seems safest.

Title: Making Himself At Home 28 Jul 2011 8:11 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting developments...
Title: Making Himself At Home 28 Jul 2011 2:13 am
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    adorable ending of this chapter

    great job showing harry's unease and uncertinty
Title: Making Himself At Home 27 Jul 2011 4:48 pm
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked it, a lot! I think it must be my favourite chapter, because most ff talk about Sev taking care of Harry. It's nice to see it the other way round. Please update soon!
Title: Making Himself At Home 27 Jul 2011 12:54 pm
Reviewer: xam (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm definitely hooked on this story now!
    Great chapter, I can't wait for Snape to wake up and realize what Harry has been up to!
Title: Making Himself At Home 27 Jul 2011 12:47 am
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter! I like the interaction between severus and harry, it feels quite natural. This is one of the best fics I have read in a long time!
Title: Making Himself At Home 27 Jul 2011 12:25 am
Reviewer: River (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I don't remember if I've commented before, but I have been following this story from the beginning and I love it.

    I hope Snape catches on quickly that Harry's doing his house elf routine, instead of thinking there's an actual house elf popping by or something. :( But he must be pretty out of it if he's mistaking Harry for his dad.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

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