| Title: The Storyteller
| 16 Aug 2014 5:54 am
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| Reviewer: Jtz (Anonymous)
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one of the shortest chapters, but the most heart touching. my second time around reading this story and its better each time
I enjoyed hearing Harry's point of view in this chapter. Interesting that he didn't remember what happened though.
Author's Response: The potions he's on tend to make people disoriented. In the real world it would be a drug related to valium and a drug related to morphine.
*sniffles*
Making me cry, I swear.
| Title: The Storyteller
| 03 May 2012 6:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Foreverhope (Anonymous)
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This is cute! Also, I'm excited that Remus is coming back into the picture :)
Aw... poor Harry :( Although I like the realistically caring Severus - it took something huge to shake him into it, so it's way more realistic than what most people do. :)
Anyways, please update soon!
| Title: The Storyteller
| 21 Nov 2011 3:30 pm
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| Reviewer: kazza (Signed)
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Lovely end to the chapter. It reminds me of the grandfather's comment in 'The Princess Bride' - as you wish.
Aw. It's soo sweet and sad at the same time. How awful that Harry actually thinks that Lily didn't want her! But I guess that's what happens when Petunia's your aunt and hates you with a passion. Please, write more. I love the way you write Harry's interactions with Severus. It's so very sweet. :)
awwww poor Harry yes he injured himself but still he has a lot on his shoulders.
I loved seeing the calm caring side of severus though
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