| Title: Glimmers of Truth
| 17 Aug 2014 5:06 am
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| Reviewer: Jtz (Anonymous)
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| Title: Glimmers of Truth
| 01 Dec 2012 9:39 pm
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| Reviewer: Opal (Anonymous)
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I think a 'be' should be between you'd and better.
"I think, in this particular instance, you'd better off if you did."
P.S. I greatly injoy the story. I love the characters. I also love how life isn't easy in your story.
Ooooh so angsty. Love it. But wish that Sev would tell Harry the truth about being his father. It'll be tough for them both obviously.
These scenes are so well written I was riveted. I felt so bad for both of them that if the chapter had gone on much longer I'd probably have been crying. Well done!
Poor Harry, but at least he's talking.
| Title: Glimmers of Truth
| 24 Jun 2012 11:33 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Oh Severus. Put that cup of tea down, and get up those stairs to show Harry you care. Quickly!
| Title: Glimmers of Truth
| 24 Jun 2012 11:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very powerful chapter I get the impression tht things are coming to a head between them. I hope they both survive. Thank you again for a great chapter.
Oh no.! Will he ever tell Harry that he's his father? I hope so soon, before Harry finds out himself.
I did the happy dance when I saw that you'd updated. Great job too!
Ahh poor Harry, that was a bit of a rough chapter for him! At least he got it out though :)
Awww. Poor Harry. Thanks for the update! :D
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