Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 17 Aug 2014 8:13 am
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Reviewer: Jtz (Anonymous)
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Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 11 Aug 2014 2:44 am
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Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed)
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What a lovely chapter! I like the 'ghosts' appearing. How terrible that Abraxus Malfoy contributed to Eileen's death, and I hope that James will apologize to Severus. Can't wait to read more!
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 11 Jul 2014 5:17 pm
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Reviewer: CoreyTaylor (Anonymous)
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I was so happy when I saw the new chapter! I began to worry that you've abandoned this fic. I really enjoy this story and I hope that the new chapter is coming out soon! (hope my english isn't too bad.I am not a native speaker of english...)
So Dumbledore ran into Sirius? I'm anxious to read the details of that story, not to mention how he plans to clear Sirius's name. Poor Harry is going to be put into an awkward situation between Sirius and Severus.
The details of Eileen's death sound very suspicious.... I wonder what Abraxas's motives were?
Can't wait for more! :)
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 20 Jun 2014 4:40 am
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Reviewer: ShieldMist (Anonymous)
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This was really amazing! Fantastic writing and character development! And you didn't make Snape all fluffy like others usually do. Really great job!
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 19 Jun 2014 10:07 pm
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Reviewer: kaelisea (Anonymous)
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So glad your back! Great update!
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 18 Jun 2014 8:06 pm
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Anonymous)
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I've been enjoying this story so very much. It will be interesting if James supports Severus against any claim from Sirius. And is Sirius really trying to get custody, or it Albus just assuming that? Poor Minerva, well, hopefully she'll recover and really help Harry.
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 18 Jun 2014 8:06 pm
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Anonymous)
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I've been enjoying this story so very much. It will be interesting if James supports Severus against any claim from Sirius. And is Sirius really trying to get custody, or it Albus just assuming that? Poor Minerva, well, hopefully she'll recover and really help Harry.
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 18 Jun 2014 4:30 pm
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Reviewer: ilreies (Signed)
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YAY o/ a delayed response here cause i ended up re-reading the whole story just to get back into the feel of it. and i just fell in love with this story again.
i love love love how you had woven the various plot points together and the emotional depth of each characters can be felt through your writing. the speech and mannerisms are much in-character as they could in this AU and it's really an excellent read.
thanks for the update and moving the plot! can't wait for the next one!
ps. are you going to update the copy on AO3? (;
Lovely update! I'm really interested by where this story is going - great plot development.
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