| Title: Snuffles and the Storyteller
| 28 Aug 2022 2:11 am
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| Reviewer: dex (Signed)
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I cried basically every chapter! Absolutely beautiful, I've read this through at least 3 times and still come back to it. Thank you so much for sharing!
Wow. I loved this story. I laughed and even got teary eyed in a few chapter. You are an amazing storyteller!
That was a really good story.
I am still utterly P.O.-ed that you killed Neville; and I'm not going to say that that wasn't the reason I only reviewed twice, because it totally was and you totally deserve the punishment.
However, it was an amazing story. I really liked it and would probably be more okay with Nev's death if I'd been warned and talked myself up to it, but gonna be honest you lost points for that.
Anyway, I loved the different dynamics and how Harry handled it all and the wizarding culture you put in it, that wasn't Rowling's.
| Title: Snuffles and the Storyteller
| 20 Aug 2021 6:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Mrs-S (Signed)
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Wow, what a ride. I loved this story so much I had to create a profile just so I could review it! I don’t want to spoil anything for anyone else ... So let me just say that where one say that character appear out of character there is an excellent device to explain why that is, but it’s not so OOC that you don’t recognize the character.
I liked that you were critical of Dumbles machinations without bashing the character.
Well done handling sensitive subjects, however now I have to buy a new box of tissues **sniff**
Definitely will be worth a 2nd read though.
Very hard story to read, but very good and believable. Just depressing, as to be expected. Sequel?
This was awesome. Just awesome!
| Title: Snuffles and the Storyteller
| 16 Jun 2016 8:29 am
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| Reviewer: Olga () (Anonymous)
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Your story became one of my favourite. I love your heroes! I am impressed by style - you showed the slow development of heroes' relationships and typical teenager's reactions. Thank you very much!
| Title: Snuffles and the Storyteller
| 23 May 2016 5:33 am
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| Reviewer: FrancineMarie (Anonymous)
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You, this story, literally everything. Perfection. Exactly what I wanted, simply lovely. Thank you
| Title: Snuffles and the Storyteller
| 06 Feb 2016 11:29 am
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| Reviewer: Jilliane (Signed)
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What an excellent and well plotted story! I really loved this. Your Severus, even in his more emotional moments was still totally in character. I liked it hat the Dursleys were brought to a realistic punishment for their treatment of Harry. I felt bad for poor Neville, but although sad it was well written and believable. And, you wrote a Hermione I loved to hate. She has always been my very least liked HP character, with her bossiness and nosiness and interfering in Harry's personal issues. Just once I'd love to read a story where Harry tells Hermione to just sut up and butt out and not apologise for it later. Your Hermione was infuriating, but that's good, you wrote her well, and I was glad to see Severus at least tell her to mind her own business for once. This is definitely one of the better "Nape is Harry's father" stories. Thans for sharing.
| Title: Snuffles and the Storyteller
| 31 Jan 2016 1:18 am
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| Reviewer: sctmutlow (Anonymous)
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Absolutely awesome story. You wonderfully captured Harry's plight and struggles of an abused child. Well done, Sir. My heart was breaking every chapter. Thank you for such a will written story.
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