| Title: Betrayed
| 09 Mar 2011 10:10 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Amazing story. I love how you have set up the characters, especially the interaction between Snape and Lupin. I am looking forward to reading more!
| Title: Betrayed
| 08 Mar 2011 12:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love the fact that it was all understated and didn't go over the top far more affecting that way
Hard to take, but very well-written.
Great emotions in this chapter. It will take time for Harry to realize that he doesn't deserve the treatment the Dursleys give him.
Awwe poor Harry. Of course he would feel betrayed by his friends,but I'm sure he will see that they ment well. Love Snapes 'lines'.
Great two chapters! Uh oh, a werewolf and the dursleys in one room?! Hehehe can't wait to see that.
| Title: Betrayed
| 07 Mar 2011 10:48 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh Harry...... More please I wan tto see where this goes next ...
I love it! I love it! Fantastic chapter! Great job with Harry, and with all of the other characters as well. This is a very enjoyable story and I can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!
I can't believe you killed off Neville! Poor kid. This is a very good story. Please update soon.
Really really good so far! I love Snape so much!! :D
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