awww Neville awwww
as for the twins and Hermionie speaking up I am not surprised at all!!!
hopefully the next chapter will be up soon
Oh my! Poor Neville! I really didn't expect that! I certainly hope that Uncle Algie gets the Dementor's Kiss for what he did! You did a good job in explaining Neville being an abused child by describing how his mannerisms and issues with memory and magic could be directly attributed to what Algie did to him.
I find Harry's denial of the fact that he's been abused to be rather realistic, unfortunately. I'm looking forward to seeing just how his screening goes (because I can't see Snape allowing Harry to skiv off until Monday), and what the aftermath of all of this might be.
Good job so far!
| Title: Aftermath
| 28 Feb 2011 5:45 am
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| Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous)
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Very well-written story. I'm looking forward to more chapters to see how this plays out. Too bad, though, that you had to choose Longbottom to kill. Would have been better to choose some minor character that we hardly knew. (I'm not finding fault, just expressing my preference as a Neville admirer.)
wow, what a story, great start. not seen one of abuse written this way. looking forward to the other chapters.
Great ending, loved Severus' internal monologue and your portrayal of Hermione, Fred and George's revelation. Harry's thoughts on what constitutes abuse was also very well written.
| Title: Aftermath
| 28 Feb 2011 12:51 am
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| Reviewer: lexie (Anonymous)
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this is one of the best, most interesting stories i've ever read on p&s! I love it! Please update soon, I know it's probably irritating to be repeatedly asked to do that, but PLEASEEEE I CAN'T WAIT! this is just great. thank you!
| Title: Aftermath
| 28 Feb 2011 12:25 am
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| Reviewer: Glo-Fish (Anonymous)
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I love your story. Your characterizations all ring true. I never picked up on what an extreme thing it was for Neville's Uncle to drop him out the window (to scare some magic from him.) This is a unique, insightful look at Neville's character. I love it when stories make me see things differently and make me think. I can't wait to see where this will go with Harry. I love that the twins and Hermione are concerned and were able to see things were off with him. I also appreciate that Severus listened even if he didn't fully believe it. I am excited for more! Thank you for sharing!
ooooooooooo!!!!! I can't wait to see this through. Wonderful chapter!
Very good story so far. Update as soon as you possibly can and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Aww I'm glad that Harry's friends found enough courage to tell Lupin and Snape. It's the hardest thing-to tell someone about a friend's suspected abuse. I hope that Snape will be able make Harry go to his appointment...I have a feeling that Harry will give everyone a run for their money...great job and update soon!
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