Excellent start - can't wait to see what happens when Severus sets up Harry's examination. Great stuff.
| Title: Home Again
| 25 Feb 2011 12:48 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Poor Neville ! I hope to see more of this story soon thank you....
Ohh, this is awesome! Wonderful, wonderful job! Great start with the background and having it all work out. I would never of thought of Neville, but the way you have it set up is masterful! Thanks so much for starting this! I look forward to seeing what happens next!
Author's Response: When I saw the challenge, a conversation I had with a friend of mine some years back sprang to mind. More details about what I think is wrong with various people's families will come to light.
Wow! Awesome start, Paganaidd. I truly can't wait to the next update.
Damn! Why did it have to be Neville?
He was the last Longbottom.
Author's Response: Sadly, the Pureblood families are dying out for one reason or another.
I am so excited about this! You're off to a great start. I had tears in my eyes about Neville. Keep up the good work!
wow. that was really well done. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Oh wow, I'm really into this. This is so intense, and sad. I always felt like this was such a possibility too. Can't wait to see what's next.
Wow! What a fist chapter! Poor Neville. And poor Severus. To feel guilty over another death that wasn't his falt, is heart breaking.
Harry is gonna have a hell of a time trying to get out of this one!
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
| Title: Home Again
| 25 Feb 2011 2:44 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Great start. Interesting explanation for Neville's difficulties
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