Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 19 Jun 2014 10:07 pm
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Reviewer: kaelisea (Anonymous)
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So glad your back! Great update!
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 18 Jun 2014 8:06 pm
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Anonymous)
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I've been enjoying this story so very much. It will be interesting if James supports Severus against any claim from Sirius. And is Sirius really trying to get custody, or it Albus just assuming that? Poor Minerva, well, hopefully she'll recover and really help Harry.
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 18 Jun 2014 8:06 pm
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Reviewer: severusphoenix (Anonymous)
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I've been enjoying this story so very much. It will be interesting if James supports Severus against any claim from Sirius. And is Sirius really trying to get custody, or it Albus just assuming that? Poor Minerva, well, hopefully she'll recover and really help Harry.
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 18 Jun 2014 4:30 pm
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Reviewer: ilreies (Signed)
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YAY o/ a delayed response here cause i ended up re-reading the whole story just to get back into the feel of it. and i just fell in love with this story again.
i love love love how you had woven the various plot points together and the emotional depth of each characters can be felt through your writing. the speech and mannerisms are much in-character as they could in this AU and it's really an excellent read.
thanks for the update and moving the plot! can't wait for the next one!
ps. are you going to update the copy on AO3? (;
Lovely update! I'm really interested by where this story is going - great plot development.
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 17 Jun 2014 8:15 pm
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Reviewer: kiragecko (Anonymous)
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Oh dear. I want to LIKE Dumbledore. This does not seem like good build up to a scene where I like Dumbledore. This seems like a build up to a scene where every one give Dumbledore a piece of their mind and he is sad. If we can make Snape nice, surely someone can do the same to Dumbledore? Anyways, as wonderful as it always is and thank you.
I'm so very glad you updated!!!
Poor Minerva, that spell hit her awfully hard.
Yay. a new chapter. The appearance Eileen and James were an interesting angle. I wonder how Sirius feels. Albus did let him go to Azkaban without a trial. Still, he hated Snape so I'm looking forward to what comes next.
James as a ghost is a hoot. Loved the discussion he had with his mother. Great conversation airlIners. So good to see Sev think of Harry first. Glad you will be updating.
Title: Unexpected Intelligence
| 17 Jun 2014 12:53 am
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great to have this story back and in such form! Thank you for keeping this wonderful story going!
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