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Reviews For Sunset Memories
Title: Sunset Memories 01 Mar 2011 12:19 am
Reviewer: Snapegirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, what a sweet story!

    I liked how you incorporated the flashbacks into the story, they were great!

    I also enjoyed how Harry defended Severus and the Slytherins instead of that lame excuse he told him in the Epilogue.

    And I'm happy Al is in Slytherin after all1 It's about time.

    Is the raven Severus in disguise? Maybe an Animagus form? Or maybe his spirit is inside the raven?

    Author's Response:

    Aww thank you Snapegirl! 

     I had a rather difficult time attempting to write this (this was my...third? rewrite). Yeah, I didn't like that lame excuse in the Epilogue either. I thought that Al should be in Slytherin-it just seemed to fit. Yep, the raven is Severus...I was leaning towards an Animagus form but that that's to be intrepreted by the reader. :-D Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, it means a lot! :-D 

Title: Sunset Memories 28 Feb 2011 5:01 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A raven, is it?! If it didn't say The End at the end, I'd say that was a cliffhanger instead of the end! Okay, you've got me wondering-- Did Sev "come back" as a raven? Is the raven Harry's animagus form? Should Albus Severus actually have been in Ravenclaw? Do we get a sequel so we can "tune in tomorrow" for the next intriguing installment?! Nice one, autumn! :-)

    Author's Response: hehe shadow! You are very close in your guesses about the raven! I have no plans for a sequel at this time, but that could change! :-) Thanks again for reading and reviewing! :-D 
Title: Sunset Memories 28 Feb 2011 4:38 am
Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I loved this. It's wonderful. Is the raven a sign or a connection to Severus?

    Author's Response: Aww thank you Roma. Yes, the raven is supposed to be a sign/connection to Severus :-D 
Title: Sunset Memories 28 Feb 2011 4:37 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Awe!! Excellent story Aut! I loved it! You're descriptions are wonderful and the Ravan was a beautiful! You did an excellent job with the dialoge and the little 'flashes' that Harry got were perfect! :D

    Author's Response: Aww thank you DOA! I'm glad to know that you liked it! :-) 
Title: Sunset Memories 28 Feb 2011 2:12 am
Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed) [Report This]
    Awe. Very nice story, Autumn. I like the short, key blurbs of Harry remembering Snape. I especially love your last line of with the raven. Very nice. :D

    Author's Response: Aww thank you Lan and congrats on your fic too! :-D 
Title: Sunset Memories 28 Feb 2011 1:19 am
Reviewer: snapeswidow (Signed) [Report This]
    Awwwe....Aut! That was so beautiful. I love how you had the spirit of Snape as a raven watch Al's sorting. Wonderful job Autumn.

    Author's Response: Aww thank you Wid, y'alls reviews make my day :-) !
Title: Sunset Memories 28 Feb 2011 1:07 am
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, loved the ending! Great story, Harry's internal monologue and the interaction between him and his son were both really well written and felt very authentic. Great job ^^

    Author's Response: Aww thanks...I'm glad that you liked it!
Title: Sunset Memories 27 Feb 2011 11:58 pm
Reviewer: angeleye68 (Signed) [Report This]
    This was so sweet. I love Harry and Albus Severus stories. Well done.

    Author's Response: Aww thank you!
Title: Sunset Memories 27 Feb 2011 10:36 pm
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    That was sweet!

    Author's Response: thank you
Title: Sunset Memories 27 Feb 2011 9:59 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story, autumn! I love how mature Harry is and how he tells Al the truth and helps him to be open-minded. If more people had been more open-minded in the past, perhaps the Slytherins wouldn't have felt so isolated. Perhaps more of them would have openly embraced the light side. Hopefully, this new generation can overcome the prejudices and set things right within Hogwarts.

    Author's Response: aww thanks Kristeh! :-D 

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