Ah, I thought you'd do that; it's the perfect place for a cliff-hanger but, at the same time, it's unbelievably cruel! You'd better update soon!
You've depicted Severus beautifully; it's very in character for him to be so suspicious and I loved how you've combined his two sides- the 'professor Snape' persona and the Severus he was for Lily. Your portrayal of Harry, Dumbledore and Lily were also great. An entertaining, well written chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story, Morgana. Thank you so much for your comments. I appreciate them! :D
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