| Title: A Long Night
| 05 May 2021 4:05 am
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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I'm not sure about how she seems to be forgiving of what he's basically started straight out (that he hated her husband, hates her son, and treats her son like crap) ... Most stories with Lilly tend to go that way for some reason though, disappointing as it is. But I shall not judge until I've read a bit further at least. Fingers crossed
Omg! Who else is dead though!
Woah, I'm loving this story. Ièm really interested to know where you are going with it.
Good point Snape!! I wonder if someone resurrected her? Great story. Great chapter. I love everything right now.
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
| Title: A Long Night
| 27 Apr 2011 6:54 pm
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| Reviewer: Grownupron (Anonymous)
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Whyw ould Lily trust Snape after he helped to murder her husband?
Author's Response: She doesn't yet know that Snape delivered the prophecy. Thanks for reading. :-)
I like this a lot :) That last thought of Snape's is especially noteworthy.
Good story
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
I'm really excited about this story! It's very original!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear that!
| Title: A Long Night
| 12 Mar 2011 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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Good Story interesting plot line, Poor lily, severus, and harry
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
| Title: A Long Night
| 10 Mar 2011 11:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I wondered when someone was going to bring that up. Great chapter and you have really got the feelings between them absolutly right thank you
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you're enjoying it!
I like this so far. Plenty of questions being raised, and I look forward to how things will resolve.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, rosina! :-)
Harry's fears and hopes were so adorable and touching and I'm happy that Lily is acting so lovingly when with him. ^____^
The way Severus' and Lily act around each other is brilliantly written, so realistic and hope inspiring. ^^
Weeeaaah! Snape "takes Harry to bed"! ^_____^ Soooo cute! I appreciate the fact that their views (e.g. Snape's view on Harry) are indeed not changing from one moment to the other as that would take the magic out of what makes Harry and Snape stories so intreguing. Please, please, please, gift me with a quick update, I can't wait to know how this will go on!
Your Melfis.
Author's Response: Aww, yeah, I'm glad you're enjoying this. Your review made me smile. Thank you!
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