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Title: Two Potters and a Snape 25 Feb 2014 4:38 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh boy. This should be interesting. I think though, that Lilly does know what she is doing, encouraging the two of them to spend time together.
Title: Two Potters and a Snape 25 Jan 2012 6:40 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    ohh! i love slush puppies!
Title: Two Potters and a Snape 27 Mar 2011 10:00 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe, evil Snapey. ^^ Demanding that Harry behaves without doing the same. Anyway, I scent more than a few nice, exciting/ dramatic and maybe cute scenes out there. ^___^
    Lily is cute when she is barely awake. Oh, and I love the fact that you gave her such a simply normal habit as snoring. It makes her human and not the perfect person some do portray her as.
    Great chap, can't wait for more, your Melfis.

    Author's Response:

    SnapesYukuai, thank you for all your reviews. I love them. <3

    I'm glad you like Lily and I hope she can continue to live up to that. :-)

    Again, thanks for all the support! 

Title: Two Potters and a Snape 24 Mar 2011 9:16 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I think Lily knew exactly what she was doing! I think Harry should be made to get a bath before they leave, that way Lily will notice that Harry doesn't have any suitable clothing. What are they doing for money? Please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, yes, a reader ahead of the story! Awesome! Everything you brought up will be addressed; some in the very next chapter. It's cool to see somebody paying so much attention to those little details. ;-)

    Thank you so much for your comments! :D

Title: Two Potters and a Snape 24 Mar 2011 5:34 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus and Harry! Severus is the adult, though, but he still acts like a child at times. Perhaps Lily will bring the two together.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Snape demonstrated pretty clearly in canon that as smart as he is, he can definitely be childish at times.

    Thanks for the comments! They make me smile. :-) 

Title: Two Potters and a Snape 24 Mar 2011 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Jaylen (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fabulous!! Your writing is wonderful and the story really moves. Can't wait for the next chapter, the intrigue of what really happened to Lily is killing me!

    Author's Response:

    Aww, I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! Check back within a few days! 

    And thanks so much for the comments! :D 

Title: Two Potters and a Snape 24 Mar 2011 2:57 pm
Reviewer: watercrystals (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, I'm loving this storyline. And everyone is so in-character! It's brilliant, the way you've written it all to be very believeable, especially Lily since no one would be cheerful, healthy and already a knowing mother after being locked away for ten years and than instead of a toddler, she has a 11year old.
    This chapter was my favourite of the lot, although they were each very good. I am really looking forward to seeing where you take this! It's exciting, really, and you'be done it all so well. I also like when you've set it, after Harry's 1st year (will Lily be asking him questions, trying to get to know her son? Like who his friends are, his favourite classes, etc etc), because he's also not a teenager yet, meaning as a kid he would still be more open to hugging and the childhood-linking things.
    Also you never mentioned though, what became of Hedwig. I mean, you said she was there with them and than that was it. I'd have thought she'd be let out during the night or Harry would be focusing on her as well, but after she arrived her presence seemed to no non-existent.
    I love many sections of this fic already, although when Lily asked if anyone smelled dead fish, I really laughed rather hard at that! Glad Severus is going to be joining Lily on their little parenthood adaption and love the little moments with Harry and his mother as well as the Severus and Lily stuff, of course. And the cuckoo clock was a great addition as well. And the idea of removing all the magic to see if she was who she said she was; a very logical touch.
    Anyway, I adore this fic already and very eagerly await more!! Please update soon!

    Author's Response:

    watercrystals, this time it was your review that made me grin at my screen like an imbecile. Thank you for that. :D

    - I'm glad you find Lily believable. I'll freely admit I was a bit concerned about that aspect. 

    - Yes, Lily and Harry will have some time for questions and just generally getting to know each other. That will come soon.

    - When you brought up Hedwig, I started laughing till I cried. You are so correct. You see, I have this awful editing compulsion and so much ends up on the "cutting room floor", so to speak. I always end up finding something that maybe doesn't need to be mentioned. Unfortunately,  poor dear Hedwig got cut out of Chapter Three. But since you mentioned it, I decided to put her back in. So if you go look, she is mentioned. Thanks for pointing that out! I love readers who pay attention to the small things. :-)

    Thank you again so much for your lovely review. It kept me smiling all day.  

Title: Two Potters and a Snape 24 Mar 2011 7:43 am
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome!!! :D

    Author's Response: Aww, thanks! :D
Title: Two Potters and a Snape 24 Mar 2011 5:24 am
Reviewer: Snivilily (Signed) [Report This]
    I love this! Poor Severus is so overwhelmed. I look foward to the next chapter!!

    Author's Response: I'm glad! And things will only get more overwhelming, I'm afraid. Thank you for reviewing! :D
Title: Two Potters and a Snape 24 Mar 2011 12:57 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter! I'm liking Lily as a character, and so far you've really illustrated Severus' stubbornness. Thanks for the chapter! It made my day to see you updated.

    Author's Response: Yay! I'm so glad! I hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks a billion for your reviews! :D

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