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Title: Taking Chances 25 Feb 2014 4:49 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! I hope that she gets her magic back.

    I think that Snape is turning out to be very parental. Hee hee. Just don't tell him I said that.

    Great story. Really enjoying it.
Title: Taking Chances 03 Apr 2011 8:04 pm
Reviewer: wandlorean (Signed) [Report This]
    I refuse to take the blame for your negligence, Vic. You allowed yourself to be distracted by the deliciousness of home fries. Denial will get you nowhere; acceptance is the first step.

    This story has a shadow looming over it. It's quite haunting and just gives the reader a feeling of dread and a sense of impending doom and maybe a bit of hope at the same time, which is nothing short of wonderful. I love stories like that, stories that can you make you feel several different things simultaneously. Well done, Miss.

    Author's Response:

    Ha, Lore! Yeah. Right. If anyone gets blamed, it's going to be you. Especially with his latest story you've roped me into reading. ;-)

    I'm totally glad you said it gave you a feeling of dread and doom, because that's what I was hoping readers would get out of it. So thank you for that. 

    -Vic

    P.S. Don't be in denial. It's not good for you. It's your fault. Accept it. 

Title: Taking Chances 01 Apr 2011 8:17 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    :0) I like!! Usually I don't like stories where Lily comes back or Harry goes back in time or w/e, but this one's good so far! I love how Sev and Lily argue, like it's not suddenly perfect all the time. Poor Snape though. How does Lily not know that he's a DE?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, RhiannanT! I'm very glad you like it so far.

    Your question and others I've received have brought to my attention some things I realize I may have done a poor job in explaining. But to answer your question, she does know. Just not that he delivered the prophecy. I apologize for the confusion.

    I hope you continue to enjoy the coming chapters.

    -VS

Title: Taking Chances 01 Apr 2011 8:48 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really loving this. I haven't read anything remotely like this and am hooked. I hope the next update will be soon.

    Author's Response:

    Aww, thanks so much, firefly. I'm glad you find the story somewhat unique and hope you enjoy the latest chapter. 

    Thank you again for your feedback!

    -VS

Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love their interaction especially Harry and Severus thank you

    Author's Response: Aww, thank YOU, Fmh! :D
Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 8:58 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, Severus. Poor guy is already doubting what Lily will say when she finds out he's a Death Eater. Your Severus and Harry are totally in character which is hard to do when all you want to do is see Severus and Harry get along.

    A few things to think about. Your scene selection. For example, you made a big deal about the doctor's office exam, but when the exam came it took place off the page and there was quite a bit of talk about the library yet we don't see Harry and Severus in the library. I thought for sure that scene was going to play into how Harry mentioned earlier he wasn't very good at reading. As my professor says, "Make the scenes work harder."

    Interesting twist with Lily's magicless state. I wonder where that's headed and how it'll play into the story, and how Harry will react to that.

    I hope soon we'll get some kind of progress with the relationship between Harry and Severus, something small that'll hint they're headed in the right direction. Perhaps Harry needs help with his homework and asks Lily but Lily can't remember the theory behind some magic thing, so she asks Severus to help Harry while she's still sitting there so Severus has to behave.

    Oh, and is this the place I should state it's not totally my fault? ;)

    Author's Response:

    It is your fault, Ella. Deny it all you want. The fault is yours. ;-)

    Thank you so much for all your writing tips. I really do appreciate them. Hopefully my writing will improve and the story will too.

    Thanks again!

    -Vic

    P.S. It's still your fault.

Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 4:39 am
Reviewer: Kanzenhsohi (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing and now suspenseful! Can't wait to read more!!

    Author's Response: Oooh, thanks a bunch! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 3:37 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Killer chapter! ;) I love Lily so much! And Severus seems very in character. I think you're doing a wonderful job on how he'd act with Lily around. I really like Harry too, as he seems so innocent. He's kind of funny, with his jumping down the sidewalk! Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much, Whitetail! I'm glad to hear that you like the characters. That means a great deal!
Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 3:36 am
Reviewer: Snivilily (Signed) [Report This]
    It's so sad how he is willing to tell Lily everything even if it means she'll hate him. I hope she reacts okay. I really, REALLY love this story.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! Thanks much for the comment! 
Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 1:33 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wonder what happened to Lily's magic. I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! 

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