| Title: Gather Up The Past
| 05 May 2021 2:04 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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And she should! Literally just confessed that he basically told voldie he could do whatever he wants to her child as long as he gets her. Thats obsessive, creepy behavior. On top of her having just learned that he had the audacity to continue to treat her child like crap after he thought she was gone ... I can't see any normal person just forgiving that. Eventually, yes, even I would. But right away, not a chance
| Title: Gather Up The Past
| 30 Jan 2012 12:03 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for updating I like the realistic way Lily is behaving towards Severus
| Title: Gather Up The Past
| 29 Jan 2012 7:30 pm
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| Reviewer: LeeRoy (Signed)
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I'm really liking this story. I do hope Lily sees that Severus is truly sorry and not make the same mistake she made when she was fifteen. I also hope Severus and Harry continue on with thier rather interesting father/son relationship. Hopefully, by the end of the story, they *will* be father and son in truth. (Hint...Hint...)
Why didn't Lily seek out Sirius before going to Petunia? She wouldn't have known about Sirius' supposed betrayal and therefore should have expected to find Harry with him. Right? At the very least, wouldn't she have asked Dumbledore or Severus why Harry wasn't with Sirius? After all, she would know that Sirius wasn't their secret keeper.
Love the chapter and can't wait for what happens next.
Vic,
This was an awesome chapter! I loved it. I also love that I actually know what I'm talking about while I'm reviewing this. I just got done leaving some comments on other people's poems for my poetry class and that felt like trying to critique something in Chinese. lol. :) I really hope Lily stays with Severus and eventually forgives him. I also can't wait for some more Harry and Severus interaction. I think Lily might be even less tolerant towards Severus' attitude towards him.
I totally felt for Severus there having to tell Lily all of that. It couldn't be easy for him to say those words when he knew how damaging they'd be. I loved it, and I hope the next one won't take quite as long. :P ;)
OMG! You finally updated. :P Now I need to go read it. I'm just super excited to see that you've updated.
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