AWESOME! I love it!!!!! Please update soon! Are Lily and Sev going to get married??? :DDDD
Author's Response: Well, if I believed in spoilers, I might say that they... oh wait -- that would be telling. Sorry, I'm a firm believer in Not Telling. ;-) But thanks for the review! Look for an update within a few days!
| Title: A Long Night
| 10 Mar 2011 6:17 am
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Wow! I love the last line "We buried somebody. Somebody else is dead." That sums it up in a nutshell. What the Heck is going on! Lily doesn't seems to trust Dumbledore in chapter one or two, but in this one she is wrapped in his arms. So, who took down the wards? How did Lily escape? And most importantly, who held her prisoner and why? I know its coming but this is simply intriguing. Thanks
Author's Response: Oh, it's coming, but very slowly! Thanks so much for your enthusiastic review, Chelle! :D
| Title: A Long Night
| 10 Mar 2011 6:00 am
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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wow! this story idea is amazing and I am eager to see where it goes. I loved the characters of Lily, Harry, Sev and Dumbledore that you have portrayed.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much, DS! I appreciate the encouragement! :D
O: Wow! This is AWESOME!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you like it! :D
| Title: A Long Night
| 10 Mar 2011 4:22 am
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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This is quite an original idea. I've seen a couple of stories where Lily has lived, but not where anything works out like this. I love this start!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to hear it!
wow
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, pretty much. Thanks! :D
You kept me on the edge of my seat with this chapter. Very well done.
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch, CeeCeeMee. :D
Whoa. Now that's a shocker. I can hardly wait to find out where she's been and who hid her away for all these years.
I really liked this first chapter and am now going to scurry along to the next. Thanks for sharing your tale with us.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D
I'm really enjoying this story so far! I like that you have the development here occurring rather carefully-- so often it's a rushed affair, as writers seem as eager as readers to get to the "juicy bits," not realizing they're only delicious if we're made to wait for them. Lovely pacing, a good writing style, and I enjoy the way Snape seems somewhat younger and stripped of his defenses, but you've not made him wholly un-Snapelike, either. Well portrayed. Also liking Lily and her development as a character. She's frequently presented rather flatly, but that's not the case here.
Lots of elements going on here, and plenty of intrigue! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: GraveDigger, your review made me sit here and grin at the computer like an idiot. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thank you so much! :D I hope you're going to update "Between the Lines" soon! The suspense is going to kill me, I swear. ;-)
| Title: A Long Night
| 10 Mar 2011 12:31 am
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| Reviewer: Whitetail (Anonymous)
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I love it! Oh my gosh this is good idea, and the last line was killer! I only just came across this and read all three chapters in one go. The characters are so good, and I love how you've written Snape. The story has got ust the right amount of tension, mystery and heartache all mixed up into one. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, thanks, Whitetail! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :D
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