Oh, ending is good. I wonder who they buried, enemy or maybe real Lily or something @.@
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wow. great chapter.
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More please?
This is an excellent beginning. Can't wait to read the rest!
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I look forward to the explanations, and Harry and Severus having to share Lily.
Author's Response: Ah, yes, that should be interesting, I imagine. Thanks for the comments! :D
| Title: Reunion
| 06 Mar 2011 12:22 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Argh ! a cliffy more please thank you.
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really liking this story. looking forward to the next chapter.
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| Title: The Stranger
| 05 Mar 2011 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Caecelia (Anonymous)
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Absolutely can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! I think you pace the story very well and appreciate the time you take to plausibly motivate each character's reactions. I am also impressed by your voicing -- Snape sounds very much like his canon self, as do Dumbledore and Harry. Thank you, and continue soon!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it and hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks so much! :D
Ah, I thought you'd do that; it's the perfect place for a cliff-hanger but, at the same time, it's unbelievably cruel! You'd better update soon!
You've depicted Severus beautifully; it's very in character for him to be so suspicious and I loved how you've combined his two sides- the 'professor Snape' persona and the Severus he was for Lily. Your portrayal of Harry, Dumbledore and Lily were also great. An entertaining, well written chapter.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story, Morgana. Thank you so much for your comments. I appreciate them! :D
| Title: The Stranger
| 04 Mar 2011 10:11 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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oh Very interesting I think that bird was lily! hah! OR maybe not time will tell *S* more please.
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Brilliant premise and very well-written; I love the interaction between Harry, Petunia and Lily, it's so crisp and believable. I also am intregued by what happened to Lily and who took her prisoner that night.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it so far, Morgana! Thanks so much! :-)
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