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Title: Gather Up The Past 24 Jan 2012 8:52 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Vic,
    This was an awesome chapter! I loved it. I also love that I actually know what I'm talking about while I'm reviewing this. I just got done leaving some comments on other people's poems for my poetry class and that felt like trying to critique something in Chinese. lol. :) I really hope Lily stays with Severus and eventually forgives him. I also can't wait for some more Harry and Severus interaction. I think Lily might be even less tolerant towards Severus' attitude towards him.

    I totally felt for Severus there having to tell Lily all of that. It couldn't be easy for him to say those words when he knew how damaging they'd be. I loved it, and I hope the next one won't take quite as long. :P ;)
Title: Gather Up The Past 24 Jan 2012 8:33 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! You finally updated. :P Now I need to go read it. I'm just super excited to see that you've updated.
Title: Farther Forward 22 May 2011 9:28 pm
Reviewer: SongoftheDarquePhoenix (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a very interesting fic- I'll like to see where it goes....

    Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I'm planning on updating very soon! :-)
Title: Farther Forward 11 May 2011 10:20 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    I wonder who is coming by the Floo?
    I loved the story and can't wait for more!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry I haven't updated in so long. I'm planning an update within the next few days. :-)
Title: Farther Forward 04 May 2011 10:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved this one lots of Harry Severus interaction and Lily is becoming a character thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you! Check back soon for an update!
Title: Temporary Home 03 May 2011 1:44 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Loved it. Of course Harry would get into trouble. I love that Snape knows that Lily is not a morning person. thanks for sharing this story with us!

    Author's Response: Thanks again for your comments. I'm sorry I haven't updated in so long, but I've got a chapter ready to go within the next day or so. :-)
Title: A Long Night 03 May 2011 1:25 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Good point Snape!! I wonder if someone resurrected her? Great story. Great chapter. I love everything right now.

    Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Title: Reunion 03 May 2011 12:58 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great. I love how they were careful to be sure that it was really her. Harry's hope is lovely to read. Love Snape's thoughts. Well done with everyone's character.

    Author's Response: Thanks again! I'm glad to hear it.
Title: The Stranger 03 May 2011 12:35 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW. this is such an amazing premise. I love how you are portraying Lily, she seems real. Not a fake bouncy person, but someone who fits in. Great job with Petunia, Dudley and Harry. I liked the opening with Snape and the parrot, seeing some part of him we didn't know before with the little old lady. Great start.

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much for the nice comments, Jan! Definitely made me smile. :-)
Title: Farther Forward 30 Apr 2011 11:58 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    More, more, more!!! Well, first of all: THANK YOU FOR THIS ONE!! ^____^ Great chapter!! I loved how Harry and Snape were having a nearly normal conversation without realising it. ^^ And how Severus treated Harry's foot. cuuuteee!!
    Weaah, the situation between Lily and Sev is getting to a peak.... damn, it's so exciting! They are so sweet and have such sensitive moments and all the while you wonder how Lily will take Severus news. I personally think that she won't be as angry as Sev may think. After all it could have been everybody to which the prophecy pointed. Anyway, can't wait for more, your Melfis.

    Author's Response:
    SnapesYukuai, your reviews never fail to make me smile. Like, seriously. Thanks for that. You are totally made of awesomesauce. :-)
     
    - VS 

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