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Reviews For Whispers in the Dark
Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much Romanticide! The next chapter will be out sometime this week, I hope. :-) -VS
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. -VS
Author's Response: Snape will be getting to the bottom of that issue quite soon. Thanks for the comments! -VS
Author's Response: Thank you, Whitetail! I'm really happy to hear you like Snape's character. Thanks for all your comments! :D -VS
Author's Response: Only time will tell. Thank so much for your comments. :D -VS
Author's Response: She doesn't yet know that Snape delivered the prophecy. Thanks for reading. :-)
PLeeeeeeaaaasse, update as quickly as you can, I'm completely hyped by your story!! Your Melfis. Author's Response: I am so freakin happy you're enjoying this story! And I love your reviews! Thanks so much for all of them. -VS
Author's Response: Hopefully they'll be getting some of that soon! Thanks for your review. :-)
Hope they learn a bit more about each other soon! Wonder who's dead! And looking forward to Remus's appearance. Lily made a good poit-why wouldn't Remus-or anyone-have visited Harry? It's really interesting how she has a fresh perspective on things. Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely comments, anathi! I do believe you win the "make-me-grin-at-my-computer-like-an-idiot" Award for this week! ;-) I hope you will continue to enjoy the coming chapters! Thanks for reading! -VS
Great chapter! I loved the ending scene. Severus doesn't get Harry was trying to reach out to him, essentially looking for a father figure. Although I bet if Severus figured that out at this point, he'd be trying to commit himself to the psych ward at St. Mungo's. It was great that Harry and Lily really connected in this chapter. One little writing tip, however. When you wrote that scene you did a lot of telling rather than showing. I know you wanted to summarize things, but next time a situation like this comes up think of a few choice things for the character to say in dialogue. Essentially, make the scene more active and engaging by showing rather than telling. And of course I can't forget about Harry realizing he'll never have a relationship with his dad. That was very touching and a welcome revelation. Poor child. He's finally realizing what he's been missing all these years and only now is that impacting him emotionally. I can't wait to see what happens next. I've noticed that Snape is still calling Harry, Potter, and I'm wondering when Lily will insist Severus calls Harry by his first name. She's obviously the mediator, and it'll be interesting to see how it all plays out. Author's Response: Ella, I'm glad that Harry's actions are somewhat obvious to the reader. I was a bit concerned about that. Yeah, the Harry and Lily scene really gave me trouble. I'm actually very relieved to have you point out what some of the trouble was, because it proved I wasn't being obsessively crazy. I couldn't get it right. So thanks for that feedback. Also, I am becoming increasingly convinced you've stolen my notes. Or I am much too obvious. Lily will have a bone to pick with Severus soon. ;-) Thanks again! -Vic |
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