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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: The Sweetest Sadness 19 Apr 2011 4:07 am
Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Severus needs to learn more about the real Harry. Also - and he probably wouldn't have picked this up from his parents - but a quick way to alienate a parent is to be obvious about disliking their child.

    I like this dynamic between the three. They all have a lot to learn about each other.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, Wynnleaf, for all your comments. Snape is running quite a risk with the way he treats Harry, isn't he?

    I'm very happy you're enjoying this!

    -VS 

Title: The Sweetest Sadness 19 Apr 2011 3:39 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wonder what Remus will think when he finds out Lily is alive. I can't wait to see more Harry and Severus scenes.

    Author's Response:

    They're on their way, Kristi, I promise. Thank you for your patience and for your comments! I appreciate it!

    -VS 

Title: The Sweetest Sadness 19 Apr 2011 2:04 am
Reviewer: Deco (Anonymous) [Report This]
    He wants a male role model, dimwit!

    Author's Response:

    Ha! Exactly! Thanks, Deco! :-)

    -VS

Title: The Sweetest Sadness 19 Apr 2011 1:04 am
Reviewer: socks4dobby (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Poor Harry.

    Author's Response: Indeed. Thanks very much!
Title: The Sweetest Sadness 19 Apr 2011 12:59 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I think Harry might be searching for someone to look up to ... and poor Severus in his inability to see that! Just so you know, I noticed a tiny error that you'd probably want to know about. During the part that talks about how the Ministry wouldn't notice any magical activity in Baske, you wrote "The Ministry of would never ...". You left out Magic. Anyways, lovely chapter and I look forward to more! :)

    Author's Response:

    You hit the nail on the head, Whitetail. Snape is being quite clueless right now.

    Also, thank you so much for pointing out the typo. I have fixed it and really do appreciate you letting me know.

    Thanks for all the wonderful comments and your feedback!

    -VS 

Title: The Sweetest Sadness 19 Apr 2011 12:52 am
Reviewer: Snivilily (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Poor Snape has no idea how to deal with children, it's amusing. Can't wait for the next one!

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much, Snivilily. I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story!

    -VS 

Title: The Sweetest Sadness 19 Apr 2011 12:07 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    this is great! Is Snape ever going to warm up to harry?

    Author's Response:

    Probably. It might take some coaxing though. Thank you for the review, hpfanficfan!

    -VS

Title: Taking Chances 03 Apr 2011 8:04 pm
Reviewer: wandlorean (Signed) [Report This]
    I refuse to take the blame for your negligence, Vic. You allowed yourself to be distracted by the deliciousness of home fries. Denial will get you nowhere; acceptance is the first step.

    This story has a shadow looming over it. It's quite haunting and just gives the reader a feeling of dread and a sense of impending doom and maybe a bit of hope at the same time, which is nothing short of wonderful. I love stories like that, stories that can you make you feel several different things simultaneously. Well done, Miss.

    Author's Response:

    Ha, Lore! Yeah. Right. If anyone gets blamed, it's going to be you. Especially with his latest story you've roped me into reading. ;-)

    I'm totally glad you said it gave you a feeling of dread and doom, because that's what I was hoping readers would get out of it. So thank you for that. 

    -Vic

    P.S. Don't be in denial. It's not good for you. It's your fault. Accept it. 

Title: Taking Chances 01 Apr 2011 8:17 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    :0) I like!! Usually I don't like stories where Lily comes back or Harry goes back in time or w/e, but this one's good so far! I love how Sev and Lily argue, like it's not suddenly perfect all the time. Poor Snape though. How does Lily not know that he's a DE?

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, RhiannanT! I'm very glad you like it so far.

    Your question and others I've received have brought to my attention some things I realize I may have done a poor job in explaining. But to answer your question, she does know. Just not that he delivered the prophecy. I apologize for the confusion.

    I hope you continue to enjoy the coming chapters.

    -VS

Title: Taking Chances 01 Apr 2011 8:48 am
Reviewer: firefly5151 (Signed) [Report This]
    I am really loving this. I haven't read anything remotely like this and am hooked. I hope the next update will be soon.

    Author's Response:

    Aww, thanks so much, firefly. I'm glad you find the story somewhat unique and hope you enjoy the latest chapter. 

    Thank you again for your feedback!

    -VS


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