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Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 11:32 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Love their interaction especially Harry and Severus thank you

    Author's Response: Aww, thank YOU, Fmh! :D
Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 8:58 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, Severus. Poor guy is already doubting what Lily will say when she finds out he's a Death Eater. Your Severus and Harry are totally in character which is hard to do when all you want to do is see Severus and Harry get along.

    A few things to think about. Your scene selection. For example, you made a big deal about the doctor's office exam, but when the exam came it took place off the page and there was quite a bit of talk about the library yet we don't see Harry and Severus in the library. I thought for sure that scene was going to play into how Harry mentioned earlier he wasn't very good at reading. As my professor says, "Make the scenes work harder."

    Interesting twist with Lily's magicless state. I wonder where that's headed and how it'll play into the story, and how Harry will react to that.

    I hope soon we'll get some kind of progress with the relationship between Harry and Severus, something small that'll hint they're headed in the right direction. Perhaps Harry needs help with his homework and asks Lily but Lily can't remember the theory behind some magic thing, so she asks Severus to help Harry while she's still sitting there so Severus has to behave.

    Oh, and is this the place I should state it's not totally my fault? ;)

    Author's Response:

    It is your fault, Ella. Deny it all you want. The fault is yours. ;-)

    Thank you so much for all your writing tips. I really do appreciate them. Hopefully my writing will improve and the story will too.

    Thanks again!

    -Vic

    P.S. It's still your fault.

Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 4:39 am
Reviewer: Kanzenhsohi (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing and now suspenseful! Can't wait to read more!!

    Author's Response: Oooh, thanks a bunch! I'm so happy you're enjoying it!
Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 3:37 am
Reviewer: Whitetail (Signed) [Report This]
    Killer chapter! ;) I love Lily so much! And Severus seems very in character. I think you're doing a wonderful job on how he'd act with Lily around. I really like Harry too, as he seems so innocent. He's kind of funny, with his jumping down the sidewalk! Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much, Whitetail! I'm glad to hear that you like the characters. That means a great deal!
Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 3:36 am
Reviewer: Snivilily (Signed) [Report This]
    It's so sad how he is willing to tell Lily everything even if it means she'll hate him. I hope she reacts okay. I really, REALLY love this story.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that! Thanks much for the comment! 
Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 1:33 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I wonder what happened to Lily's magic. I can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Thank you! 
Title: Taking Chances 31 Mar 2011 12:09 am
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Jippy, jippy, a new chap!! ^___^ I was quite surprised to find it as I must have stumbled over it mere minutes after you posted it... well, I certainly can't say that I'm not happy. ^____^ Great chap. I feel that maybe Snape and Harry will be able to bond through their connection to Lily as much as I suspect that there will be fights about her. Both would be most interesting! Lily's and Sev's relationship is exactly as I would have envisioned it. peppered with thorns but genuine and deep. Sev can be so tender when being with Lily, I like that and hope that after sometime he will show such tenderness to Harry, too.
    Yours happily, Melfis.

    Author's Response:

    SnapesYukuai, your reviews always make me so happy. I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter and I hope you enjoy the latest one too.

    Thanks for all your lovely comments. 

Title: Two Potters and a Snape 27 Mar 2011 10:00 pm
Reviewer: SnapesYukuai (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe, evil Snapey. ^^ Demanding that Harry behaves without doing the same. Anyway, I scent more than a few nice, exciting/ dramatic and maybe cute scenes out there. ^___^
    Lily is cute when she is barely awake. Oh, and I love the fact that you gave her such a simply normal habit as snoring. It makes her human and not the perfect person some do portray her as.
    Great chap, can't wait for more, your Melfis.

    Author's Response:

    SnapesYukuai, thank you for all your reviews. I love them. <3

    I'm glad you like Lily and I hope she can continue to live up to that. :-)

    Again, thanks for all the support! 

Title: Two Potters and a Snape 24 Mar 2011 9:16 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I think Lily knew exactly what she was doing! I think Harry should be made to get a bath before they leave, that way Lily will notice that Harry doesn't have any suitable clothing. What are they doing for money? Please update soon.

    Author's Response:

    Ah, yes, a reader ahead of the story! Awesome! Everything you brought up will be addressed; some in the very next chapter. It's cool to see somebody paying so much attention to those little details. ;-)

    Thank you so much for your comments! :D

Title: Two Potters and a Snape 24 Mar 2011 5:34 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Severus and Harry! Severus is the adult, though, but he still acts like a child at times. Perhaps Lily will bring the two together.

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Snape demonstrated pretty clearly in canon that as smart as he is, he can definitely be childish at times.

    Thanks for the comments! They make me smile. :-) 


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