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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
Lovely nom de plume.... Still reading and re-reading your stories --- please think about writing more of this wonderful tale.*giving a bouquet of spring flowers and a chocolate box* Did you know your splendid banner by J. Worley for this story, the one with the 6.1" magnificently male Severus and small Harry , has been changed to a yeowling kitten? It has gone. Can you and JW. restore it to this site? It was making me sit dreamy-eyed, with violet pink sighs, for many long minutes, before I started reading. I miss it, and Alan R., very much - like we all do. The world is empty without that Londoner. Unmistakable. (Ps. I only give Will Shakespeare 1o in rating.) Happy New Year to you and yours.
I absolutely ADORE Snape's reply. WWonderfully snarky, very Snapeish. I like :) I can hardly wait for the face-to-face confrontation between Snape and Harry. I think Harry is going to give away something. he's not really that good an actor. :) Can't wait for school to start! Update soon! Author's Response: Thanks for you review! :) Yeah, I'm growing rather fond of Toby myself. Ad for the confusion, Harry was worried that if the Order of the Phoeix had been watching him (for his safety), than they ight know about the little boy he had with him and since Snape was a member of the Order than he might already know more than Harry wanted him to. If Snape knows about the boy than he wouldn't have much trouble putting together e similarities in the letter and what is going on. This is only IF the whole Order has in facteen informed etc. Hope that clears it up. Haha, thanks, I have to edit Snape's reply about 3 times to make sure it's proper english and incharacter so I'm glad my work has paid off! :). And you're assuming that Harry won't be able to get out of that confrontation, remember that this is the worst possible scenario in which could happen to him. Unless you arefering to when he sees Snape again, because in that case you're right...not even Harry is that good of an actor. Glad you thinks so and thanks for the review! Will be updating again sometime over the next few days.
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