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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
Author's Response: I do not believe that the mistakes are quite so terrible unless one deliberately searches for them. I was behind in my updating schedule and therefore had only been able to read over it briefy a few times. I may need a beta and yet I cannot find anyone who is active enough that I do not have to wait for them in order to update whenever I need to, unless I send them later chapters in advance, perhaps. I doubt I will be using a beta for this fic though, as think it's alright without one for now.
Author's Response: I'm pleased to hear that. I shall be updating sometime over the next few days. It's going to be quite a struggle to hide a small boy for an entire year, so you'll have to wait and se how that pans out. Hogwarts could work for or against them in this matter. As for Dobby, he will be making an appearance later on. Neville will know at one point also, I have plans for that. Interesting idea, since the boy into potions than he could benefit from that knowledge, thanks! :)
Good job getting Toby onto the train without any major hitches. And kudos for having Harry appealing to her cleverness. This was especially nice coming from Toby. I could almost see the batting of innocent lashes as he said what he did to her. And then Toby asking her for a book to read? Priceless. I'm looking forward to seeing how Harry manages to circumvent a face-to-face meeting with Snape. LOL Keep up the great work and I hope your computer problems are remedied soon. Author's Response: It sure does, :P. Thanks. Yeah, Harry and Toby had really worked that moment with Hermione hehe. Indeed, Harry cannot (for obvious reasons), go through with Snape's request for a face-to-face discussion and therefore Harry had better get his minworking hard on a way around that! The computer is still being worked on but is showing progress since we have backup ideas if our main attempt fails. Thank-you for the review and I will.
CF x Author's Response: Wow, thanks, I'm thrilled to hear it. I shall be updating again sometime over the next few days. :)
Author's Response: Glad you think so. Perhaps he could, however Harry is yet to even think of that option yet. Dobby will be making an appearance later though.
Great chapter. I can't wait to see how they're going to maneuver Hogwarts. I'm anxious for the next chapter. Oh, and Crystal. Do you have another computer, or can someone you know let you use theirs? Mine did the same thing as yours, except that the power just wouldn't work on it. Anyway, I have another computer, and my son was freaking out because he had a hockey game on the computer that wouldn't work, so I took the hard drive out of that computer and put it into the other one. It's really not that hard to do. You could do that, and copy the files onto a CD or something or on the other computer, if it's not feasible to keep two hard drives in the other computer I have one computer with two hard drives on it. Maybe you know someone who can help you. Author's Response: Indeed he has! And it's not just that he's young himself but has to provide things to Toby that he'd never had; he's truly in uncharted territory here and it just going by his heart and determination. Snape won't be finding out just yet, but he's a very smart man ;) Thanks, I sha be updating again within the next few days. As for my computer, I am very knowledgeable about many methods, although thanks for trying to help. It's in the process of what you mentioned and we have a few backup ideas ifthat doesn't work out. We had already tried the two harddrive thing but the connections were different and a whole other headache. So our frind who is an expert on these things (computer tech) has taken it and is going to see what he can with the adie of his computer. When we get it back, everything I have will be saved 100% to usb rather than just most of it backuped every few months/weeks. Thanks for your help though :) And for the review!
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