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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
You do all the characters very in-character and I congradulate you on that. I also lo how all your chapter names have a sort of meaning behind it. It was very well structered. I look forward to the next chapter emensly! BYE!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm thrilled to read your comments. I'm glad you like my writing and the story. Thanks for the review.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad to hear it. I understand what you mean, Harry thought that with no idea if he was right or not but simply because that's who he was reminded of. Toby looks almost EXACTLY like Snape, except younger and nicer. He also acts a bit like him and it's just what Harry thought, and than it had him wondering if it's possible. However, if he were to truly consider and believe it than have it proven or something similar, he would probably - deep down - be just a shocked as everyone else. I know what you mean but there is just such a strong resemblence that it would seem impossible for theboy to look like Snape and not be his son, so naturally it was easier to think of him that way, i that makes any sense. Thanks for your review.
Toby is so cute! I hope all goes well and Snape isn't angry when/if he figures out it's Harry writing! :DD keep up the good work!
You have me intrigued by the pensieve incident! It will be interesting to see the conflict between Harry's new priorities and old interests. I also like how Toby formed a different opinion about Snape despite what Harry said. He seems quite intuitive! It would be cool to have another encounter with Snape, before the discovery. I'm looking forward to more letter exchanges, too! Maybe Harry will start seeking parenting advice from Snape...things could get interesting! Keep up the good work! Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, I'm taking my time with that incident since it's an important plot point. And true, as time goes along Harry will begin to experience that conflict. Because when he has to devote all his spare time to a child, the things he wants to do will take second priority. Yes, Toby is quite like his father in that way ;). There will be a few more Snape encounters before the discovery, in fact they will even have a face-to-face soon enough. The letters start as mentioned, such as for the potions questions, but I created them for another reason, so yes, Harry will be writing about more off-topic things as well. As for parenting advice...hm, would one really dare to ask that of Severus Snape? And they will get interesting the more the correspondance goes along. I will, and thank-you for your review! :)
I love this story!
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