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Title: Exceeding Expectations 14 Apr 2012 4:57 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice
Title: Exceeding Expectations 14 Apr 2012 4:56 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice
Title: Exceeding Expectations 11 Apr 2012 3:02 am
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad that Toby will get to go to Hogsmeade. Harry is so busy with school that it doesn't sound like he always has time for him so Hogsmeade will be a nice treat. I am looking forward to more about the change in Harry's patronus as well.
Title: Exceeding Expectations 07 Jun 2011 10:25 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    a lioness huh, great choice!

    must read more!
Title: Exceeding Expectations 28 Mar 2011 10:53 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank goodness Hermione's back on side interesting that she and Harry never argued in the books. Love the spell and the change of Patronus I wonder if this is because he is protecting Toby.
Title: Exceeding Expectations 27 Mar 2011 8:52 am
Reviewer: 1reader_1writer (Signed) [Report This]
    I love the Toby/Harry relationship. They're really great for each other. I thought the revelation about Draco and the Marauders was brilliant.
Title: Exceeding Expectations 22 Mar 2011 2:27 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    I only just read the last chapter along with this one...didn't notice it'd been posted already. The story is still progressing nicely, and DD's reaction to the proof positive of Toby's presence in the castle is definitely in-character!
Title: Exceeding Expectations 21 Mar 2011 11:52 pm
Reviewer: pandora5002002 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi,
    first, this is my third try to send a review. This security code don't like me.
    Anyway..I enjoy reading your story. It has an unusual plot. I never thought it would work, but it does.
    I have to take the time to read your other stories.
    Thank you for the fun while reading your story.
Title: Exceeding Expectations 21 Mar 2011 11:36 pm
Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    yay! There was lots and lots of Toby, Funny Snape (gasp!), Draco and much more to celebrate!

    I am very happy that Toby was a very big part of this chapter, because in previous chapters he was not as envolved as he was just now. Toby is a really fantastical character and very well presented.

    My favourite line for this chapter was probably Snape : Did he really underestimate Harry this much? Classic. I also loved that when Harry tried to caste the Patronus the first time to get rid of theatrics however this was still caution and perhaps confusion behind those obsidian eyes.

    More letters from Severus Snape! I am very happy with that. I think he question that Snape asked Harry was very well-done, congrats! I can't wait to see if harry can answer it or not.

    Draco was on this one to, which is great! Harry was have been really thankful of Ginny and Luna when they arrived. To bad we couldn't have seen what happened next, I am sure it would have been good.

    I am curious about the argument Remus and Snape were in as you haven't mentioned it recently. I hope we find out what happened soon because I can't wait. Snape seemed pretty reluctant to share it with anyone either which in never a good sign.

    I love the spell you created 'ExpelliCorpus' couldn't have done it better myself.. Nah just kidding, I love it and what it is does. Snape must be feeling very frustrated, why does Potter have to be good at something?!?

    I can't wait for the Hogsmeade visit, it is sure to be great. Especially with Toby there, I hope more people find out about it in the future as it will make it is much more interesting.

    I also have a question, since most likely everyone or nearly everyone in the DA will find out about Toby, will it be started up again? They could still train in the Room of Requirement but Toby could just watch from the sidelines. I really love the DA so I hope you go through with this idea.

    I like Hermione again now, as Harry and her have made friends again. She seems to like Toby so much so it was sad that she wasn't around him whilst they were fighting, I am sure she would have been very sad about it.

    Overall this chapter was amazing and probably the best one yet. You have true talent in writing fanfiction. Always looking forward to the next chapter update! BYE!!!

    Author's Response:

    Some chapters will be like that, centering on Toby a lot or else barely at all. It depends on what is going on, really, although I try to put him in as much as possible.
    The letters will decrease for a short while and than they'll be back more frequent. Draco will also gradually be in the story more and more. It won't be revealed for a little longer yet exactly what Remus and Severus were fighting about although more clues will be given throughout. More people will be finding out about Toby soon, though. I have no intention for that many DA members to know about Toby, however I idea of him going to one of those sessions is appealing. I shall consider a way to make this possible. Hermione is growing rather fond of Toby, it's almost sibling-like. She was indeed very sad about not seeing him for several weeks and having missed a part on his life. Thanks for the review and your comments really made me smile. I'll be updating again soon enough. Thank-you.

Title: Exceeding Expectations 21 Mar 2011 11:27 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    From what I recalled there were unused classrooms that were in Hogwarts. Couldn't one of them be used as a classroom/playground setting for Toby?

    Author's Response: Perhaps, although there is still the risky liklihood that someone may come across them. Whereas the Room of Requirement is designed for concealment.

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