| Title: Exceeding Expectations
| 21 Mar 2011 3:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Kat (Anonymous)
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I really love Toby, he's my favorite character.
This story is really well written and unique.
I hope you update very soon!
| Title: Exceeding Expectations
| 21 Mar 2011 3:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Wow! There were many surprises in this chapter. I am taking a shot in the dark here about Harry's Patronus. Could the Lioness be because now Harry is like a Lioness protecting her cub, because he's taken on a parental role taking care of Toby?
I loved that Snape was impressed with Harry's non-verbal spells.
Good chappie; looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks. And yeah, but even more in the next one ;). And about the Patronus, you're right. Alsoa lion because he's in Gryffindor, but the cub part was the main reason I chose that animal for him. There are a few underlining reasons as well. Glad to hear it, thanks for your review.
Another great chapter! ^_^ I really like how you have Snape and Harry writing back and forth to each other. I like seeing what Snape thinks of him without knowing who it really is. Anyway, post again soon!!
| Title: Exceeding Expectations
| 21 Mar 2011 11:53 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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OH Very Very Nice I love this Toby's first Hogsmead trip!
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