Everyone will know at this speed
I am glad that Neville knows about Toby. Neville is sensible and can help keep an eye on him, too. The snow fight was a good scene. Harry's revelation of how often he leaped before he looked was good, too. Caring for Toby is giving Harry some new perspectives.
it seems that harry is really growing up!
severus won't let this slip away...not a chance!
| Title: Who is Mildred Merrengold?
| 28 Mar 2011 11:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the chapter but Snape is no fool and I'm sure he can put 2and 2 together.
Toby is certainly teaching Harry a great many things. I guess we know who Harry's mother is, but I wonder who Toby's is? I liked this chapter
| Title: Who is Mildred Merrengold?
| 25 Mar 2011 1:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Hahaha, silly Harry. He goes through a groundbreaking realisation that if he had followed the rules he wouldn't have put himself and others in so much danger and created so many problems, and then in the next second he begs Remus to keep Toby a secret ignoring the fact that keeping Toby at Hogwarts is breaking the rules :P
But I'm intrigued. The plot is unfolding!
| Title: Who is Mildred Merrengold?
| 25 Mar 2011 7:58 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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I can't wait to see more. I think you're doing really well!
I think maybe I'd like to see a scene where Severus finds out that Toby is his son and gets really mad at Harry and tells him to just stay away from Toby so he doesn't screw him up (or something), and he doesn't realize at that point that Harry is also his son, and Harry feels very upset to lose Toby and also to not have anyone... maybe Harry would feel jealous of Toby to suddenly have an adult that he does not.
| Title: Who is Mildred Merrengold?
| 25 Mar 2011 3:46 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Anonymous)
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Oh, I can't wait for more! This is such an awesome story!
The way you have people finding out is very realistic... this is often the way it happens when someone has big secrets to keep. I'm surprised Harry isn't more anxious about people finding out. I would think there would come a point when he would realize, "Oh no... too many people know and there's a chance any of them could tell someone else..."
Awesome story! I can't wait to see some Harry/Sev or Sev/Toby parental action!
Author's Response: Thank-you, I'm always happy to hear that. Harry will be soon, since he's so focused on just having a plan and things working the way they should that he hasn't taken a moment for himself to just think about it all. That and he has his incredible sense of trust in people, so he doesn't really think anyone would tell. Unless they're an adult, because he has little reliance on them. Thanks! Thanks for your review, I will be updating sometime later tonight.
Loved it! Harry really is getting a rather large lesson in growing up fast. He's not doing that bad of a job of it either.
Thanks for the update!
V.
Good chapter! ^_^ Things are really starting to interesting...
Post more soon, please!
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