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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm thrilled to hear it, even if it's yelled :P. Yeah, he is and thanks. It will be a little while yet for ape to find out. And that concept of Harry's reaction is very intriguing, I believe I may use that, thank-you!! Your english is fine, I g what you were saying. Thanks for the review!
I loved the interaction between Irma and Harry, too. I hope Harry goes back and confides in her, or asks her more about her story, before the "discovery". A question - does Snape know Harry's his son, deep down, because your statement "Severus noticed that the change in the teenager was beginning to reflect externally as well" sounds like he's looking for signs. For reviews, what if you add an interesting question for people to answer in the reviews after each chapter? It could be about their opinions regarding what happend or what might happen. Keep at it!
I loved the interaction between Irma and Harry, too. I hope Harry goes back and confides in her, or asks her more about her story, before the "discovery". A question - does Snape know Harry's his son, deep down, because your statement "Severus noticed that the change in the teenager was beginning to reflect externally as well" sounds like he's looking for signs. For reviews, what if you add an interesting question for people to answer in the reviews after each chapter? It could be about their opinions regarding what happend or what might happen. Keep at it! Author's Response: Yeah, I can't just write about main characters in a story like this, I have to include the others as well as everyone has a part to play. Yes, there will be more of them in later chapters. Irma's character is one I intend to keep bringing into the story as she is very important later on. Harry will know most of the story before the "discovery" as you've called it. No, Snape doesn't know that Harry's his son, although deep down he can't deny that some things are quite similar or odd. This will be a little more evident later. All he knows is that something has changed with Harry a it's tht change he's keeping an eye on as he tries to understand what it means. He is looking for signs though, just not what you think it is ;). I considered that, maybe, although I think there has been a problem with the recent list too, hense less reviews lately. Thanks for yours!
As for reviews, I've been checking regularly for updates, but somehow managed to miss the past 6 chapters counting this one. Don't know what's going on with that, but that may by why your review count is down.
You had Harry and Snape writing back and forth earlier in the book, but not since then. Have you abandoned that idea? Great story as usual! Author's Response: That is the plan, Severus will know about Toby before he knows about Harry. As for the taking Toby, not sure if that's how it's going to pan out yet, I haven't got that far ahead in planning although I've started it. The writing back and forth has not at all been abandoned, there are reason for it taking longer and it's because of those writing them. I am keeping this up again soon, it's a timing matter too. Thanks and thenk-you for the review!
I think that if Harry would talk with Luna about this "secret", she could point out some things, even the truth. - Luna always see more than others and connects things like no one... ...So I'm looking forward the next chapters =o) ...And for the reviews - the story is updating with three chapters at once, can it be that people review only the last chapter? Author's Response: Thanks. Luna can see more than most, which is why I'm keeping her appearances gradual for now ;). Happy to hear it. And really? I updated the last chapter a week ago and the one before that a few days prior. I had no idea it was coming up as updating three at once, how odd...
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