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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
And I'm loving how the story has progressed! Apparently, Toby has gone into the background since he became sick, but I hope not for long! That scene was really really well done. Harry was quite desperate, but helpless. But, what with everything going on, he's really awfully young to be taking on such a.. responsibilty, if I may. It's killing me to know what Sirius told Snape, or the Order, but I have an inkling what it's about. :) But whatever it is, I appreciate that Snape is getting to realise Harry is not who he seems to be. Lol. Can't wait for more. I wonder how Harry looks like now. That brewing scene made me shake with anticipation. ARGH. Something is bound to happen soon!!! It must, or I'll die of all the contemplation. Though, is Irma Pince REALLY Snape's mother? God. That is... surprising. VERY surprising. All in all, rather well done!! Amazing job with the suspense factor, even without any killer last line~ Oh well. Update soon, okay?? Author's Response: I'm glad to read another review from you now, anyway. :) They're always very inspiring and helpful. Yes, Toby has gone into th background a bit, well up until next chapter anyway. Some people complain he's in it too much than he's in it too less, lol! Yes, Harry is too young to really be doing this, but he's always risen to the occasion, although you may begin noticing how he's cracking a little and while he's doing the best he can, he's still getting moodier and finding it more annoying at times than anything. It's worth it for him, and he's dealt with worst, so Harry just tolerates it. Haha, yeah I bet it is, although it won't be revealed in full just yet, getting closer with each chapter though. Harry is looking a lot like a younger, happier Severus apart from the obvious Lily traits in his appearance that are becoming more obvious as well. Yes, some things are starting to change and others will take a vert dramatic turn soon.
Now I'm looking forward the Christmas! =o)
Yes, I do see a stronger resimblance to Sev when Harry is as moody as he was in this chapter. So is Sev moody because he knows he is missing out on things as well. . . Thanks for the update V. |
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