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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
By the way, these last three chapters haven't shown up on the "Recent" section. Maybe posting another chapter quickly will fix that problem ;o)
Well done with compairing Snape with Voldie...many compairing were drew between Harry and Voldie, but now you mentioned...Snape really is more like Voldie than Harry is.... I really think Snape has the right to know he at least has a son....he's the father after all, if he knows he had a son maybe he wouldn't be so bitter... Harry should really approach Dumbledore...there really is no point hiding from someone who already knows the truth XD Well done, I want to see more chapters!!! Author's Response: Indeed? Interesting. Thank-you, I believe those comparisons should be noticed just as much as the ones with Harry, since they're all part of the same triangle of childhoods and possibilities, to me. Snape has every right to know he has a son, however the situationcomplicates the timing and with someone like Severus, it can change the entire outcome of things. He will know, as soon as possible. As for Dumbledore, yes Harry has every intention to approach the man, but needs a moment to come in terms with everything himself first, than d he feel betrayed by the older man in a way. Thanks for the review!
I didn't think Irma'd reveal his identity, but I like how things are developing and I've an idea or two about that memory ;) Can't wait for the third part.
Wow. That sure was a roller coaster ride, for both me and Harry (I believe I can throw you in for good measure?) It's really well built up; well enough for my sister to come into my room to find what deafened her for a minute. Lol. The conversation between Irma (Eileen?) and Harry really did show how closely Harry and Toby has bonded. Harry had come a long way from Sirius to Toby. I mean, I'd though Harry'd dwell on Sirius too much, but nope. Impulse control all's fine too. Nice. :) I think Harry will start to wonder about his own parentage too, now that his appearance had started to change. That, and Irma wasn't really subtle in speaking bout Evan. Will he? Is he going to figure it out on his own, or... The alternative is a bit fun to think of. *grins* Sev is so nasty! Can't blame him, though. Oh well. He might figure out Irma somehow saw the book in one of his student's possesion? I mean, Irma didn't know until now... He's not gonna try accioing it during Harry's Potions class, is he? Oh, and Toby's name! What a wonderful way to bring Toby back! When Snape finds out, and I have a feeling he's going to find out real soon instead of after the war, is he going to change Toby's name? Or will it be like a middle name instead, since I don't think Toby has one? What's with the cat, though? Is it going to be a major character? Something... surprising? Don't tell me it's some animagus or someone's pet in disguise.. lily Evans. 1979. I have more than an inkling what the memory is. :D Can't wait for it! OOH! The cat isn't gonna sneak in and bring Harry there, is it?? ACK! *ignore me, please.* Ahem. Anyway, I don't get why dumbledore will tell hagrid. I mean, Hagrid isn't really the kind of person I'd trust with a secret. *cough Fluffy cough* Why indeed... I think I'm rambling too much and spoiling the story with my so-called theories. Delete the thing if you want. I know I can be a little "over" sometimes... It's such amazing progress, you know? So, fantastic job, keep it up, and I really can't wait for the next chapter. SNAPE!!! Ok. I seriously need to sign off, or i won't stop. Update soon! :) Author's Response:
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