Harry was really rude to Dumbĺe
Poor Sevvy. *sniffles loudly*
they're a good idea!
loved the dinner and i can't wait to see what happens next!
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 23 May 2011 12:34 am
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| Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous)
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Wonderful. I really prefer the parchment rolls as it makes it so much easier and quicker. The owls were ood but took way to long. I loved the Irma gave them both a present and how we are now seeing a nice friendly side of her. Christmas lunch was awesome and extremely funny when Harry tried to converse with Snape. Poor Snapikins, the one time he goes to Christmas lunch.. he really does not have much luck.
I like that Severus is (very slowly) starting to see Harry just a tiny bit differntly. I also love the letter exchanges that have been going on. I wonder how long it has been since Snape wished anyone a Happy Christmas! I also would have liked to have seen Snpae's face when he reads Harry's reply aying that they disagree with what Snape said. Absolutely adored the chappie, WELL DONE!
I love snape Harry Toby interaction! It's funny. I'm getting a kittle impatient with the amount of time it's taking sev to realize. But I suppose it makes the story better.. Suspense and all that. How long do you anticipate the story to be?
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 21 Apr 2011 12:29 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the movements and conversations at Chridtmas lunch. The letters are a good idea as we will have more Severus/Harry interaction
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 19 Apr 2011 6:06 am
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| Reviewer: lyda29 (Anonymous)
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I just read all the chapters you have posted so far. Wonderful story. I really like the way Severus is beginning to examine his actions and motives. There is hope for his happiness. Irma Pince was a big surprise, but I like it. Harry and Draco's interaction is curious, I wonder were it will go, what is Draco's motivation? The only criticism I have has to do with Hagrid. It's hard to believe that he could keep quiet about Toby's presence. Looking forward to the next chapter
PERFECT!!! Please update soon!!!
I really enjoy reading this story, Toby is such a cute character and having Irma as Snape's mother is very interesting.
The parchment rolls are a great idea (they reminded me of Riddle's diary).
I love the messages exchange on Christmas morning. Maybe Toby will start liking his dad a little more, if they will write each other.
I wonder how long Sev will need to understand that JSE and Harry are the same person! (Please don't answer at this question, too much spoiler)
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