I like the charmed parchment. I can't wait for more of this story!
I sincerely hope that one does not have to wait long for this story to be undated, (Or, for that matter, for our dear Potions Master to realize that he does, indeed, have two children, as this story is of the excellent sort and excellent things should never have to be waited for. =)
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 14 Apr 2011 4:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I am so glad there is a new chapter! I loved the Christmas correspondence between Severus and "S.J. E.". The rolls of parchment are more convenient in that they can ask and answer questions more quickly and no one else can read them. I liked when everyone was shocked that Harry wanted to speak to Severus. At first, I wasn't sure if I would enjoy this story but it soon became one of my favorites. I eagerly await your next installment.
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 14 Apr 2011 12:01 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Oh I hope to see more soon that you fo updatesing.
The parchment is a great idea. Christmas lunch was good too, but I keep hoping that Toby asks Harry to make the paternity potion and then have Toby be afraid of adding his blood so Harry shows him using his own blood. What a big surprise that would be. That way both boys get a least a grandmother.
The parchment is a great idea. Christmas lunch was good too, but I keep hoping that Toby asks Harry to make the paternity potion and then have Toby be afraid of adding his blood so Harry shows him using his own blood. What a big surprise that would be. That way both boys get a least a grandmother.
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 13 Apr 2011 11:26 pm
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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I like the parchment rolls, you would have thought the original marauders would have thought of it during the school years to talk to each other in History of Magic class. Harry would have been better off with it as he could have talked to Sirus while at the Dursleys. Your reviews might have been off due to the security code giving ppl problems. I know it takes me a few times to get a review thru.
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 13 Apr 2011 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: anathi (Signed)
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Another great chapter! Love the little touches, like Dumbledore's realistic reaction to Harry's rudeness and the fact that Snape's abrupt disappearence led Harry and Draco to look at each other in puzzlement. I like how Irma's acting in a Mrs. Weasley motherly way to Harry and how he responds abashedly. And Toby's objection to Snape's answer was priceless. Can't wait to see Snape's reply.
I liked the parchment idea, though it's rife for trouble *g* Poor Severus. I hope it keeps him thinking.
| Title: December Snow - part 3
| 13 Apr 2011 6:13 pm
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| Reviewer: christy (Anonymous)
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I dont think ive posted a review for this story before but its AWESOME. I check daily for reviews, can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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