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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
Hmm. I'm reading this quite hurriedly, but am afraid I wouldn't have the time to review the next time i do read it again. Forgive me. :) But I really do want to say i enjoyed Irma and Harry's conversation very very much. :) I wonder how Harry would react when he finds out he does indeed have the same grandmother as Toby. :) Severus and the cat. Hmm. Interesting. Magical creatures like Felix (Good name!!) interest me. Severus is not going to find Felix following him everywhere, is he? Oh OH OH!!! Felix gonna run away from Toby and Snape discovers Toby because Toby was chasing after Felix who was going to Snape? I'm not making much sense. Ignore me. Anyway, good job! I await the next chapter very very very faithfully. *hint 90% Snape Harry hint* Author's Response: Hehe. I love all of your reviews and have missed them since I didn't update as soon as I usually do (blame it on a wayward inernet and me getting me own laptop in which I can finally play the Sims 3. Ahh Snape and Harry sims are wicked). Glad you enjoyed many aspects of t chapter and things are geing closer to those involved finding out about Harry and Snape being related etc. As for Felix (glad you like the name!), he will not be contributing to the discovery of Toby nor the major secrets involved, however even he has a part to play, although your theory s still likely only without the expect discoveries you mentioned. I shall never ignore you! :) Thanks and glad to hear it. As for 90% Snape and Harry in the next chapter, no I would even go as far as to say there's at least 98%. And all chapters following it have more in it than usual as well, to the point I fear my reviewers will miss the other characters for a little while, with the exception of Dumbledore. Thanks again!
And your characters as far as I'm concerned are in character :) I like your Hagrid, and that I can follow his prose without giving myself a headache (unlike the way some authors write him!) CF
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