I liked the birthday gift scene. Since Harry's talk with Snape was the day before Severus' birthday, I wondered if his birthday would be mentioned somehow in the chapter. Harry probably got the idea for the gift from Irma. It was a nice touch and a good way to show their changing feelings towards each other.
*sniffles*
I liked the present, but I didn't really understand what was special about it (other than how Sev had wanted one earlier).
| Title: The Absence of Hatred
| 24 May 2011 12:41 am
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| Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous)
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AWWW!!!! There is no words for how wonderful this chapter was. Harry finding heaps about Lily by SNAPE was awesome and I think i have two fave lines: The silence that filled the office reminded Severus of a time in fourth year when he thought his cauldron had been about to catch fire. LOL random much?? And also:Severus frowned as he remembered something and decided to voice it in order to be rid of such memories. ‘How is it that your came across the knowledge that I am descended from a long line of Slytherins? I do not recall mentioning-’ He glanced up to glare at the boy just in time to catch Harry darting from the office.I loved that! No wonder Snape had to sit there contemplating things for ages.. And how on earth did Harry find out when Snapey's B'day was? Irma perhaps? Anyway it was so awesomly awesome and I can't wait to read more.
BYE!!
| Title: The Absence of Hatred
| 02 May 2011 9:57 am
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| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
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i cant wait for them to find out the truth, i cant imagine how you will explain it, update soon pls
Oh, yay! I'm so glad things are getting better between them! Can't wait for more!
AWWWW! How adorable!!! Please update soon!
| Title: The Absence of Hatred
| 02 May 2011 2:09 am
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| Reviewer: Helene (Anonymous)
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This is a fantastic story. I love how you are changing the viewpoints of the characters involved and am looking forward to the next chapter.
| Title: The Absence of Hatred
| 02 May 2011 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the talk and interaction reall good chapter thank you
| Title: The Absence of Hatred
| 01 May 2011 5:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Lisa (Anonymous)
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I have just started reading your story yesterday and couldn't stop until I finish it. I love your story!
I also really like Toby. Looking forward to the next chapter with more Harry, Snape, Toby and Draco!
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