CHAPTER 25? your story is GREAT... wonderful... brilliant... awesome... fabulous... terrific... superb... amazing... stupendous... phenomenal... COOL. and I personally cant wait to see that chapter 25... (I honestly cant think of any more adjectives to "perfect" but I think youll get my point anyway and feel more motivated :))
| Title: Possibilities
| 12 May 2011 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Liked having Remus in the story and his cryptic letter to Severus. Toby is so lovely and deserves so much more than he has up to now. can we have more Harry Severus interaction soon?
Ooooooh, amazing, amazing chapter!!! I really do adore this! Harry's still so cute with Toby! I can't wait for more!
Well done! I love the suspense and Toby is adorable as always. I give you a 9/10.
Well, that was confusing. It must be me, but I have no idea what it meant. if Remus was lying to Harry when he outright asked, he deserves whatever ill feelings harry aims at him.
| Title: Possibilities
| 11 May 2011 4:47 pm
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| Reviewer: omrinus (Anonymous)
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Your doing a great job! Don't lose motivation; you have many fans!
After Harry's rant about lying last chapter, what will his reflection on Remus' answer be? Might he detect something suspicious in the response?
| Title: Possibilities
| 11 May 2011 4:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Yaa (Anonymous)
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hmmm what a mysterious letter! I wonder what the crusade could be.
I liked the interaction with Ron and Hermione - it was realistic.
I hope Lily didn't do anything too bad; though it's nice to see she's likely to be a 3-dimensional character!
Post soon, please!
| Title: Possibilities
| 11 May 2011 4:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I am so happy that you have updated this story! I like how Harry told off Hermione. I adore the girl but she can be a bit much. Sometimes, it is like she feels it is her right to be the smartest one in class. When will Harry tell Ron and Hermione about Toby being Professor Snape's son? Will Harry tell Severus about Toby soon rather than after the war? Remus' letter to Severus is both illuminating and I can't wait to hear Severus' response. Please update again soon! Also, when will you update "A Tale of Emerald Eyes"?
| Title: Possibilities
| 11 May 2011 3:47 pm
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| Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous)
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I'm not sure I would consider that Remus actually lied when it was more of a misdirection. He never came out and said Yes Harry James in your father and no one else. Other then the hair (which Harry admitted that he hadn't washed in a few days)and his new found liking to Potions (which Lily enjoyed too)Harry didn't give any real reason for his suspicion to being Snape's son. Harry even excused why he was so grumpy lately. But yes I can see a fall out between Remus and Harry because Remus knew what Harry wanted and didn't tell him the truth.
That was brilliant. I can't believe that Remus lied to Harry though, that's not going to go down well when he finds our! Glad to see you're continuing with the story.
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