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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
Author's Response: He cares a great deal for his mother, however Sev is also a bitter man w cannot - at this moment - find it in himself to let go to the past in the way that he is unable to forgive her yet. If she were in trouble, he would be there to help her, but or the general day-to-day things, Severus prefers they remain civil only.
Draco's an interesting character - he must be quite desperate to enter the Chamber. More Toby, please! No, no ideas where it's going on a larger scale. Will Toby, his mom, and Mildred connect to Voldemort's plans, somehow? Maybe some newspaper articles hinting what's going on in the "real world" will give us some clues. Update soon, plz! Author's Response: Oh yes, Draco is determined to get that information! I am trying to add as much Toby as possible, however with the events upcoming and the fact that the 6th year is nearing a close, I sometimes have to place the boy in lesser priority, just as Harry is doing from time to time, although he does try to fix it when he can. No, Mildred and Wenda do not connect to Voldy's plans, however I can't say much about Toby because with a boy so linked to Snape and Harry, he's likely to get caught up in the war as well, one way or another. The newspaper idea is interesting, though not sure if I'll use it. Will be updating soon, thanks for the review!
Great chapter!
tank you for that very interesting chapter. frenchy
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