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Title: Draco's Redemption 19 Mar 2012 5:02 am
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great story..I started top read this last year.. but quit... glad that I went back to read it again... nice job..
Title: Draco's Redemption 19 Mar 2012 4:06 am
Reviewer: KiwiClover (Signed) [Report This]
    Hi there! This is such an interesting take on the familiar Snape-is-Harry's-father theme. You've breathed new life into the genre, loosly following canon, though with changes that just make *sense*. And on top of that, you've worked in an incredibly well-written original character... That's no mean feat, so color me impressed! :)

    I really appreciate that there is an underlying tension throughout the fic - the mystery of Harry's parentage creates a backdrop that colors the whole story, without actually overcoming it. Nicely done! (that's not to say I'm not really, really looking forward to everything coming to light, lol)

    Anyway, I'm really enjoying this. Thank you very much for sharing!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so very much for your review, really. It was inspiring and very helpful. I loved your comments and am so glad to hear your opinions and the praise made me blush. Wow, really...you think that of my fic and writing? Thank you! That really makes me smile. Thanks again, for your review!! 

    -Mel :) 

Title: Draco's Redemption 19 Mar 2012 4:02 am
Reviewer: Jyllian (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for giving Draco redemption...I wish he did so in the books as well though. I never thought he was truly bad, just downright irritating little bugger. Update sooN!
Title: Draco's Redemption 19 Mar 2012 3:54 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! I am looking forward to Toby and Sev waking up. Toby--just because I love everything about him. Sev--I want to see his reaction to his son(s) in the light of day as it were.

    Thanks for the wonderful chapter.
    V.
Title: Draco's Redemption 19 Mar 2012 1:42 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I like the way things went in this chapter!

    I'm too muzzy on cold remedies to single out specific things that made it great, but I'm so very glad that I checked for updates and found this. :)

    I do look forward to future chapters, especially the ones where Severus and Toby get to know one another as father and son.

    Well Done!
Title: Draco's Redemption 19 Mar 2012 1:41 am
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I like the way things went in this chapter!

    I'm too muzzy on cold remedies to single out specific things that made it great, but I'm so very glad that I checked for updates and found this. :)

    I do look forward to future chapters, especially the ones where Severus and Toby get to know one another as father and son.

    Well Done!
Title: Draco's Redemption 18 Mar 2012 10:26 pm
Reviewer: Lady Destiny (Signed) [Report This]
    I really liked it! Please update again soon!
Title: Draco's Redemption 18 Mar 2012 9:14 pm
Reviewer: YeCatsJ (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved how you slightly adapted cannon to have Sirius meet Harry since Dumbledore didn't die in this version and like how Sirius gave Harry support to find out about Sev. Hope Sev finds out son. Harry pretty much has it figured out and soon will realize that Toby Is truly his brother in every aspect Can't wait for Harry to eventually tell Toby. Hope Sev wakes up in the next chapter and finally meets toby
Title: Draco's Redemption 18 Mar 2012 8:28 pm
Reviewer: Catti666 (Signed) [Report This]
    Smiles!!!! Now everything is going to settle down for his family ; ). Very nice chappy!
Title: Draco's Redemption 18 Mar 2012 6:19 pm
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I can't wait to see Snape's reaction to having not one but two sons! :)

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

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