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Title: Draco's Redemption 18 Mar 2012 6:07 pm
Reviewer: Zireael07 (Signed) [Report This]
    Love the chapter, especially where Harry sets off to find Toby, accompanied by the Malfoys. Wonder what'll happen to Snape and Toby? Does Harry wonder about his real father now that Sirius has dropped this huge hint?
Title: Draco's Redemption 18 Mar 2012 5:21 pm
Reviewer: badgerlady (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. Niggle: "aide" is a noun, referring to a person, not a verb as you've used it here. The verb is always "aid" without the e. Anyway, I liked the way you interwove canon with your AU.
Title: Draco's Redemption 18 Mar 2012 1:58 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! Intense chapter. I think that the truth is all going to come out soon.

    I am anxious to see it when it does.
Title: Draco's Redemption 18 Mar 2012 9:32 am
Reviewer: lirio de amor (Signed) [Report This]
    'What if I am Snape's son?' Harry worried.
    'Buy a lot of shampoo.' Sirius joked. 'Be who you want to be, Harry. No one can fault you for that...not me, and not Snape, though I wouldn't put it past him to try.' He rolled his eyes. 'I have to go now...the adventure is calling.'

    ^^^
    That is possibly my favorite line! Lol I love it! This chapter left me wanting to cry a bit. Harry has so much weight in his shoulders and it just isn't fair... And I feel like it is just going to get worse before it gets better. I loved this chapter, as I have loved all of them. This story is fantastic.


    Also... Draco manned up there for a bit! Nice!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so, it's one of my favourite lines as well, though this whole chapter was generally a fave for me. You're right about Harry and it's not going to be "smooth sailing" just yet. There's still a lot to happen yet! Thanks for your comments and your review! :)

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