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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
One question I have: why did Toby's magic bring him to Harry instead of, say, into the street outside the orphanage? Did it simply take him to the nearest magical, or did it recognize the family connection between him and his brother? Maybe, since it was accidental, it also sensed his desire for a family and took him there? Wonderful story! Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: Thanks for the message :) I absolutely will be working on the story again, though I do little bits here and there when I can, I'm just not sure yet when I can properly sit down and work on finishing this (along with some of my other fics). I just know it will happen someday because I'm going to make sure of it. It's not abandoned, I promise. I love this story too much, and have so many plans for it still, plus the responses have been great. On day, it will continue to completion.
Instead, we're left on a bitter note where Toby has gone with Snape, obviously angry with Harry, and there's been no reveal of Harry's true heritage. It's quite infuriating, actually. Nonetheless, it hurts that this was FAR from finished as well as incomplete. I just... *Sigh* It would have been nice to end it off on a better note, you know? Instead, it's just left here... Incomplete with no closure.
Thank you for all the lovely stories you give us, and this gem- Write more soon,please do. In a world so lacking in stable, tolerant, wise governments that don't give ..excuses for their faults, but are adult,responsible, listening to each other, not greedy for misused power; all this unrest, and discord simply is frightful.It does not feel like Christmas,more like blind commercial spending in a civil war; anger, not tolerance. Severus Snape and Alan Rickman, so missed, 1946-Always, are good to read. More fanfic please. A very quiet and beautiful Yule to you.
You stopped writing right when it came to be really tense... such a cliffhanger. 2017 is nearly ending... please don't abandon this story. So many people have loved and reviewed... we deserve a closure...
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