AAAAWWWWW so cute little toby's having a nap with daddy hope there are both safe though the rest of the fighting!
| Title: The Battles We Fight
| 02 Mar 2012 11:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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You handled the action scenes with wonderful verve and dash whilst keeping the emotional level t a wondeful pitch thank you
Wow. This is really good!
I'm sorry I can't give any constructive comments or tips for you to improve, I just think this story is great!
Emily^^
OH Wow no not a cliffy please update soon I love this story! thank you...
Awesome chapter. Love how you had Toby save Fred,Remus,and Tonks. Brilliant. Hope Sev connects the dots from voldy saying that Toby was saved by family. I want Harry and Sev to find out their connection also soon. Please.
Love the chapter. Brilliant!
| Title: The Battles We Fight
| 29 Feb 2012 9:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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I also wanted to say that I love the questions that Toby wanted to ask his father, "what is his favorite potion" etc..
Really hope those questions get answered after all is said and done.
:)
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
| Title: The Battles We Fight
| 29 Feb 2012 8:17 pm
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| Reviewer: Vanime (Signed)
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Oh gosh! This was a gripping chapter! I really hope that Severus makes it, and that Toby tells him about Harry, and then they both get to Harry and help him out. :)
Really great writing here! Loved it to bits, probably the best chapter to date too. :D
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
Oh no, I hope that Snape will live... And actually, I think that lyrics fit the story.
Keep up the good work!
I really liked the way you reunited Toby and Snape, and that the liquid luck had all those effects :) Although I didn't really like the lyrics you mixed into the story (they were kinda annoying, and they could easily be taken out, maybe a few replaced with flashes from Snape's PoV)
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