This was really good...Cannot wait until the nect Chapter
This has to be my favourite chapter in the story so far:) Toby saved so many people we love and was soo brave.
Awesome job!!
Excellent chapter! Toby just saved so many lives. Oh what one small difference can make in the grand scheme of things. I loved this chapter. It nearly had me in tears it was so heart wrenching to read about Toby trying SO hard to get to his father. Great job!
YAY! The story has come to the most important moment...the WAR! Not that I'm happy about people dying, just that the year is finally moving towards some direction. If Dumbledore isn't dead, what the heck is he doing? Destroying more Horcruxes? Update soon!
Author's Response: The most important moment is the war? Interesting perspective. Ah, but this war will be a little different than the one in the book/film, with the crucial addition of Toby and other aspects that have been brought about in this story. And not only is the year moving forward, but it's almost over and time for the summer again. You'll find out what Dumbledore has been up to soon enough. Thanks for your review, I shall be updating again in another few days or so.
I've already read this the day you published it but I forgot to review it. Great job! I like the way you combine canon and fanon plots. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing it now. Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for your comments.
Absolutely brilliant story... I love the reality you keep with the characters compared to canon and your storyline has kept my attention with every chapter- so glad I found it yesterday - I look forward to the next part!
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you think so. Thanks for your comments and review! :)
So glad you're continuing this story! You really know how to build suspense. Can't wait for the next chapter. I love all of the characters and story lines and hope they all take part in the end.
Question: Will we ever find the truth about Toby's mum?
Author's Response: Of course I am continuing it. :) Thanks, and glad to hear your comments. And in answer to your question, yes...readers will know the truth about Toby's mother at some point in the story, though I have no pinpointed which chapter exactly yet.
Wow I like how you are haveing Harry. I can't wait to the next5 chapter I wonder how harry will deal with everything that happened once it is over...I love this story!
Author's Response: Your sentence appeared inomplete. You like how I'm "having Harry"...what? I'm glad you like the story, and thanks for your review.
Great chapter to a great story. Wonder how Professor Snape will react to Toby and Harry being his...will that happen soon? And I think Harry had better get to the boathouse stat! Especially since Nagini is there..
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Snape will be learning a few truths quite soon now, so not much longer to wait! And yes, Harry should get to the boathouse! Not only is Nagini there, but Voldemort too. Thanks for your review.
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