| Title: Who is Mildred Merrengold?
| 28 Mar 2011 11:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved the chapter but Snape is no fool and I'm sure he can put 2and 2 together.
| Title: Exceeding Expectations
| 28 Mar 2011 10:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank goodness Hermione's back on side interesting that she and Harry never argued in the books. Love the spell and the change of Patronus I wonder if this is because he is protecting Toby.
I wonder if perhaps the door closed because Dumbledore was hiding there invisible and Harry just thought he had closed it on his own? It was just a thought since Dumbledore knows how to go invisible without a cloak, and since he knows about Harry and Toby. I can't imagine him knowing and just letting it go on without checking on them every now and again... unless Dobby has been reporting back?
Great as always! I can't wait for more! Seeing a new chapter brightened my day!
Author's Response: And interesting theory, however no, it wasn't Dumbledore this time. Although yes, he is getting reports from more than one source, having to keep tabs on the boys, of course.
Thanks, will be updating in a moment. :)
WONDERFUL!!! Oooh please have Harry be Snape's son-it would be AWESOME!! Oohh and here is another thing: make Harry due to many circumstances start acting and behaving more like Snape!!! Aah! That would be so cool-especially with all the Gryffindors having ot live with him! LOL! OH and please have Toby be Snape (explanation in one of my older reviews)-that would still be a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks! As my summary and the category for this fic states, Harry is indeed Snape's son, as is Toby. And as his son, Harry naturally takes after him as well, however it's not until recently that these things begin to become more noticeable, especially whe Harry's in a bad mood. Toby is not Snape, I am not going to change this, sorry. It doesn't work with the plot I want or where this is going.
I really like how Harry handled Toby's illness and Snape's letter. Good chapter :)
Toby is certainly teaching Harry a great many things. I guess we know who Harry's mother is, but I wonder who Toby's is? I liked this chapter
I love the Toby/Harry relationship. They're really great for each other. I thought the revelation about Draco and the Marauders was brilliant.
Dobby was a brilliant choice :) I just hope that Harry remembers to tell Dobby to keep Toby from being found out.
| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 2
| 27 Mar 2011 8:37 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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You're welcome for the banner. I'm glad you liked it. I really am enjoying your story and wanted it to have a really nice banner.
I have to say that I really didn't like book 6 fat all, so I'm glad you're deviating from it for the most part. I'm also thrilled to find that Harry is focusing on improving and using his brain, even if only in an effort to keep Toby safe and close by. I really like how this is going. I never understood how Harry persisted in remaining lax and lazy, even in the face of so many challenges. He had to have more smarts than he showed or he would have failed out of school.
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