interesting twists and turns. I am wondering "how long" on a lot of issues at this point. How long 1)can they keep toby a secret, 2)until Sev knows he has 2 sons, 3)unitl the boys know they are related, 4)until the "real" disasster(you know one has to be coming) happens. I am really enjoying your story--and to me these types of questions are good, as they keep me wondering.
Thanks for the update
V
| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 2
| 26 Mar 2011 10:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Nice. Glad that you updated, Kudos on a wonderful few chapters.
| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 2
| 26 Mar 2011 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 2
| 26 Mar 2011 10:40 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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All right Wow Poor Harry I did see Draco comming to help Good one I love where you are taking this .. *S* More please? *S*
| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 2
| 26 Mar 2011 4:48 pm
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| Reviewer: anathi (Signed)
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You're doing a great job!
I love how there are so many unresolved plot lines, and the feeling that the Toby-secret is precarious as the number of people who know is growing quickly.
Everyone is really in character (I can't stand the soppy Draco/Severus or the vicious Dumbledore).
I'm especially glad to see Draco's growing role. I always thought his struggle towards the end of the books was interesting and deserved more attention.
And thanks for including more of Irma (go woman!). I like the hints that she knows and sees things others might not. And it was quite Severus-like of her to admonish his inability to recall the source of the quote.
Awaiting your next update. Keep at it!
| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 2
| 26 Mar 2011 3:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous)
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I love this so far. Is Irma going to notice Toby and who he seems named after?
| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 1
| 26 Mar 2011 11:30 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Nice very nice! *S* more please
| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 1
| 26 Mar 2011 8:36 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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Oh yeah, by the way, I can make you a new banner if you want. Look at some of the banners on my stories for examples of what I can do. Let me know via e-mail or comment on one of my stories or something.
| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 1
| 26 Mar 2011 8:28 am
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| Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
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| Title: Gryffindors and Slytherins - part 1
| 26 Mar 2011 8:03 am
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| Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed)
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Ooooooh, this is still SO SO GOOD!!!! I just ADORE this story! I can't wait for the next part!
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