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Title: Theoretical Solution 21 Mar 2011 12:32 am
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter thank you
Title: A Plan Undone 19 Mar 2011 6:11 pm
Reviewer: Harriverse (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I keep wondering why Harry doesn't call for Dobby. But I'm sure you have lots of interesting things to write about and that would defeat the purpose. Besides, I'm only on the second chapter.
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 2:17 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter =o)
    I would like to ask: Does Severus know that he has two sons? From the chat with Tonks I think he knew about Harry, but does he know about Toby? Does he know that Toby's orphanage burned down and that Toby is supposedly dead for muggles? I would like to see his reaction when he discovers that his youngest son is 'dead' and than that he is alife... =o)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks. However, I cannot answer that question. The details of the conversation with Tonks is not quite as specific as you assume. He does not think his son is dead, because he has no idea who Toby is and therefore even if the details of the burned down muggle orphanage were brought to his attention, it would be meaningless to him.

    Thanks for the review, will be updating soon.

Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 1:27 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yeah I knew Dobby would work, and you also answered another question about Dumbledore seeing through invisibility cloaks. Over all this chapter smoothed over some questions and readied the stage for the next chapter... I love this story!
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 11:50 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love where you are taking this how about child minding?
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 8:17 am
Reviewer: Moon_Willow (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful. I still think Dobby shouldn't have to be the one to mind Toby. Dobby's a bit, well, too enthusiastic and will probably give in to Toby's wishes. A six year old and a house elf.. *shudders* I like how you portrayed severus this time. It's kinda fun! And Pince? What's going on in that bookworm's head?? Oh my, so many questions. Update soon.

    And for the chapter idea, how bout... Temporary guardian? or Plan in Motion? i suck at these, so... haha. I know i'm no help. ^^

    Author's Response: Thanks. I agree, however given the circumstances there is no other choice available to Harry and Toby at the moment other than to use Dobby. He may be an enthusiastic creature, but he obeys Harry and the teenager has made sure that Dobby understands this. Part of the childminding that house-elves have as their duties make sure they don't do as the child says unless the parent/master has okayed it first.
    Glad to hear it. Haha, plenty is going on in Pince's head, some in which will be revealed at the appropriate time.
    Thanks for the suggestions. I wanted to use "Plan in Motion" but still a bit too similar.I liked the "motion" but rhymed with the one I ended up choosing. Thanks though, and I shall be updating soon.
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 8:07 am
Reviewer: Peach (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next!

    "A Solution" perhaps?
Title: Theoretical Solution 18 Mar 2011 7:25 am
Reviewer: Slegend (Signed) [Report This]
    Great Chapter! I really enjoyed it!
Title: The Existence of Advantage 18 Mar 2011 12:29 am
Reviewer: Frozenfire101 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Loved it! The dueling no-verbely especially. It was very well done and I am loving the quick chapter updates. I am hoping to se lots more letters in the future, but overall is was superb!

    You do all the characters very in-character and I congradulate you on that. I also lo how all your chapter names have a sort of meaning behind it. It was very well structered.

    I look forward to the next chapter emensly! BYE!!!
Title: The Existence of Advantage 17 Mar 2011 6:28 pm
Reviewer: Melanithe (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This story is so great. I like Toby a lot because he seem so sincere and naive, and Harry like a father figure by my opinion it´s amazing idea. Your writing style is really fascinating I´m not a english native speaker so I find it kind of more interesting than styles of different authors. Thank you for your updates I am looking forward to nex chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I'm thrilled to read your comments. I'm glad you like my writing and the story. Thanks for the review.

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