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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
I would like to ask: Does Severus know that he has two sons? From the chat with Tonks I think he knew about Harry, but does he know about Toby? Does he know that Toby's orphanage burned down and that Toby is supposedly dead for muggles? I would like to see his reaction when he discovers that his youngest son is 'dead' and than that he is alife... =o) Author's Response: Thanks. However, I cannot answer that question. The details of the conversation with Tonks is not quite as specific as you assume. He does not think his son is dead, because he has no idea who Toby is and therefore even if the details of the burned down muggle orphanage were brought to his attention, it would be meaningless to him. Thanks for the review, will be updating soon.
And for the chapter idea, how bout... Temporary guardian? or Plan in Motion? i suck at these, so... haha. I know i'm no help. ^^ Author's Response: Thanks. I agree, however given the circumstances there is no other choice available to Harry and Toby at the moment other than to use Dobby. He may be an enthusiastic creature, but he obeys Harry and the teenager has made sure that Dobby understands this. Part of the childminding that house-elves have as their duties make sure they don't do as the child says unless the parent/master has okayed it first. Glad to hear it. Haha, plenty is going on in Pince's head, some in which will be revealed at the appropriate time. Thanks for the suggestions. I wanted to use "Plan in Motion" but still a bit too similar.I liked the "motion" but rhymed with the one I ended up choosing. Thanks though, and I shall be updating soon.
"A Solution" perhaps?
You do all the characters very in-character and I congradulate you on that. I also lo how all your chapter names have a sort of meaning behind it. It was very well structered. I look forward to the next chapter emensly! BYE!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm thrilled to read your comments. I'm glad you like my writing and the story. Thanks for the review. |
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