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Title: The Existence of Advantage 15 Mar 2011 11:07 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that Harry and Toby are not really brothers but then your comment about having the same hair made me wonder. Looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: Yeah, subtle cluse are being thrown in, however they are indeed brothers, as stated in my summary. This fact will not chance. Thanks, I shall be updating again over the next few days.
Title: The Existence of Advantage 15 Mar 2011 7:14 pm
Reviewer: Amylia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey, I'm really enjoying how this is going.

    I'm wondering if you intend to utilize Dobby at all, though, in helping care for and hide Toby. I'm sure you've already thought of it and there's some reason why Dobby hasn't already been enlisted, but...

    just wondering. I can't wait to see where you take this next, or what happens when Snape figures it all out. If he does. :) keep writing!

    Amylia

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad to hear that. As for Dobby, many have asked and it will finally be more properly answered in the next chapter update. What occurs then was indeed pre-planned by myself, but yes there is a reason why Dobby hasn't been enlisted.

    I will. Thanks thanks for the review!

Title: The Existence of Advantage 15 Mar 2011 5:10 pm
Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter!
    I would like to know one thing - what is Toby's surname? I think that you didn't mention it...

    Author's Response: Thanks. As for Toby's surname, I have pruposefully neglected to mention it. I was wondering when someone would notice. It shall be revealed at a later time.
Title: A Plan Undone 15 Mar 2011 6:40 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Sorry, forgot the frogs.
Title: A Plan Undone 15 Mar 2011 6:40 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy birthday Crystal. Hope you had a wonderful day. You certainly gave "us" a nice present with a great chappie.

    OOops....I'm worried now. I hope that it all turns out okay in the end. I just don't know how they're going to pull it all off.

    Author's Response:

    Thank-you, Pandora! I had a great day. Hehe, yeah I suppose I did :P.

    Yeah the more timre goes by the harder it gets and Harry is beginning to realize that he's going to need more than luck and his cloak to get through this an entire year without Toby being revealed. Which is why next chapter is so important, because it's time for them to really start working out HOW they are going to achieve this. Thanks for the review, should be updating either today or tomorrow.

Title: A Plan Undone 14 Mar 2011 3:04 pm
Reviewer: zalievana (Signed) [Report This]
    i know i am repeating myself but i want to say once more that i think this story is GREAT and ORIGINAL and i really love it:) a wierd idea occured to me while i read the Snape - Tonks exchange...could it be that Sirius somehow knew that Severus was Harrys father and told Sev so (in a fit of anger or maybe in his testament?) but Snape refused to acknowledge it...? well, no matter how it really is i am really eager to read another chapter...and then another...and another...and so on :)

    Author's Response:

    I don't mind hearing those comments over a few times, it's nice to know I can keep those things up :P. Can't give much away but anything Sirius said was not done during a state of anger nor testament. It was itnentional and aimed to adress part of an issue. However, it was not quite as specific as you may assume, but you'll have to wait and see to find out more. Severus refusing the possibility of certain things rather than the issues themselves.

    I'm glad to hear that, I'll be updating again over the next few days. Thanks for your review!

Title: A Plan Undone 14 Mar 2011 11:23 am
Reviewer: Frozenfire (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well done, Bravardo!
    Love it and I certanly can't wait for the next chapter!!
    I am really looking forward to the actual questions and lots more letters. I am really enjoying the story so far, keep it up!
    P.S Happy 21st B'day!!!!
Title: A Plan Undone 14 Mar 2011 6:45 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Happy Birthday!!
Title: A Plan Undone 14 Mar 2011 1:44 am
Reviewer: octoberrose2011 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really like your Harry. :) "Father/big brother" Harry has always been a favorite of mine and you've captured it beautifully in the three chapters you've posted.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah? I'm really happy to hear that. Wow, thank-you! I'm thrilled to hear it. Thanks for your motivating review!

Title: A Plan Undone 14 Mar 2011 1:10 am
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry needs to talk to Doby as he is more loyal to Harry then Dumbledore and he could deffinitely aid them in hiding Toby.

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