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Reviews For The Son Becomes the Father
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that, thanks. Toby is wonderful and yet you only know bit about him at this point :). I'm pleased you like it and I shall be updating in a moment.
Author's Response: Thanks. And you don't know the situation involving their births yet so you can't assume too much about how they came to exist just yet :P. Thanks for the review.
I can't wait for next chapters :)
I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU COME UP WITH!!! Thanks so much for this! Author's Response: Haha, thank-you and I'm glad to hear it. I sure do, yup. Ooh intrigue, Dobby? Well it just so happens that I am using him for an important aspect later on so you will get to see him from time to time. And yes, house-elves that report to Dumbledore are hard but remember there are ghosts, paintings and many others as well! I don't think Harry quite realizes how Dumbledore "knows everything" hehe. Or how hard this is going to really be. As for Ron and Hermione, it's rather unavoidable and yet it's also now how you would expect it. Hermione is an issue I have finally managed to find a way around (yes, she is the sort of person to turn them in for the sake of both), and Ron may surprise you yet, wait and see. He is a big brother, remember and a family person. As for Snape finding out who sends the letters, yes it would be all too easy for him...I'll explain more on that later, such as why he doesn't. Thanks for your review!! Am updating in a moment.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy to hear that and there will certainly be some struggle for Harry to be able to hide Toby AND actually attend school (meals, quidditch, classes etc). The letter shall continue either for the entire year or until something happens to result in their ending (such as some form of discovery etc). You'll have to wait and see.
Author's Response: Thanks. Pleased to hear it and I hope all of my chapters shall be like that. I too thought the letters was a good tough, also because without them there would be less Snape interaction and it wouldn't work things out too well. It does! Thanks.
Author's Response: Oh I think I've come up with something quite good for the Hogwarts smuggling incident. Thank-you and I'm glad to hear it. I shall be updating shortly.
Can't wait to see how Snape reacts when he finds out who wrote the letter! Good luck in accessing your other stories. Maybe in program files? Great chappie. Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Thank-you. And yes, to clear that confusion, Harry is Snape's son as well however the teen as no idea and (at this point), or suspicion. Toby and Harry are brothers, which Harry calls them as a cover-up in the letters without realizing that it's true. Hope that helps. Snape won't be finding out about the owner of the letter for a while yet as I have a very particular situation involved surrounding that. My files accessing issues revolve around the fact that that computer won't boot up. The harddrive is fine, but the bootup file is corrupted and therefore it won't turn on, gahh. Oh well, it's being worked on now and even though I had the laptop (battery charger died, ergh!), I am using the library computer now to update etc. Thanks for the review. Will be updating soon. |
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